Pau* that's a NBA gasol Bros (mark) reference

Expo. First scheme is a gasol Bros NBA ref. Followed by a reference to the leaking dam in Oroville California . Last 2 refs are the song "hot stepper" by in kamozi (early 90's) and no doubt "don't speak"

Intelligence of battle rap was a bit more present from one MC here. Better set ups and jabs. Pretty easy decision here. Loser needs to Tighten his schemes and the winner needs to form more complex punches for effect. Fairssss

nice drop bro. im a rookie but ill get better with time. and so will you man. lets rep and step it up. 

H1! Dope first drop. My advice to you is to battle often and judge often. When you judge, pay attention to the cadences of the other MCs. Some guys will always talk shit and tell you that you need work certain things. But, truth be told, it's not hard at all. There's allot more politics than I expected. But I learned from cekspree and nostra. I've only been battling for 2 weeks. And your first drop was waaaaaaay better than mine.

These battles left a lot to be desires guys. Lots of stretched multies. Sometimes it feels like your trying to hard to make the rhyme work and just shove words in that sound unnatural. 

Winning got this through being more direct with his punches. Think both could do better though, keep grinding. Fairs in. 

Owww! Wordplay was STRONG From T. Much better Verse.

I'm still waiting for the line that rhymes with EAT THE CAKE, IKE! What I'm saying is, only CAPITALIZE if it HAPPENS TO RHYME..."EAT THE CAKE IKE, BEAT A SNAKE LIKE, TINA FEY'S DYKE, not-this-part, shopping-cart, block-your-fart with a THREE BY EIGHT SPIKE" See, it's easy! 

Kind of disappointed in Trins verse here. Upload an avatar btw