Where do these guys be coming from? I dont even think i need to expo this. Its rather clear. Smh. I just dont get it. 

both yal got adoptions!

Grut....you didnt have much when it comes to a battle verse. There werent any solid punches and the rhyming was fairly basic. If you can incorporate some solid punches and multi syllable rhyming into it you should see an improvement. the part I like most was the kick hits, bruce Lee bar, but it was pretty simple...if you can develop it some way with a solid setup and frame the punch better, it would hit much harder. add a couple multis and fill the box and you have the making of a battle verse.Noh8

Bnas...Pretty simple verse from you...Ive seen much better. rhymes were pretty simple with 2 syll count for majority. There werent any real heavy punches, but you had a few jabs that landed. A couple rhymes seemed a bit forced(eg.cop mocking line) so it would rhyme. clear the room was prolly my fav bar. Overall, I know youre better than what you dropped here and went kinda light.

FV in. not a bad read, but I think both can step it up from this, no h8 to either.

Dope bnas heavy hitter! Vote is in no hate peace

.. (SINNER)

Not a great battle. References too vague for b and a bit too simple for g