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Haha, sportscenter was nice...made me lol. Good shit G Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-05 23:28:11

Thanks man! Good battle! Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-05 23:37:27

The Sportscenter line was fucking hilarious. Triniguinea had a personal shot in his opener too, "who the fuck is gangsta in BC", that shit was Lmao-worthy...Nostra came really light here, not light enough to lose, but light enough that he's lucky he didn't get sniped by someone else...the closer was repetitive & a switch in cadence from the rest of his verse. Nevertheless, fv is in, good battle. Voted: NostradaVus / Curfew
Posted on: 2017-03-05 23:50:33

I hear you spree. This was actually a quick one I put up on his open, but you beat me to that one, so I just sent it to him as is. Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-05 23:59:54

fv Voted: NostradaVus / Curfew
Posted on: 2017-03-06 10:13:27

Nostradavus: First bar was alright but the concept is very played. Second bar was dope...I fucks w/ it and the concept was creative and the bar was executed well. 3rd bar was okay but I felt you could have twisted/worded it better. Also, how do you put the rapper slug to someones dome? has to work both ways. The last bar was ruined by the repeating words in your multi (YOU'LL GET rhymed w/ TOOL GET and then YOULL GET again). Overall I think you understand how to formulate a verse and how to punch w/ multis. Just need to have more creative concepts and make sure not to repeat multi sets. Tringuinea: First line was pretty funny but it wasn't executed well and the rhyme was basic. Second bar was not very good and was an incomplete concept. 3rd bar was a solid idea but the execution was off and didn't have a strong set up or multi. Last bar was just self hype and needed to be more aimed at your opponent. You could learn a thing or two about how your opponent sets up his bars (multis, metaphors, punchlines etc) in order to get better. Fairs dropped I felt Nostradavus had this coonvincingly Voted: NostradaVus / Curfew
Posted on: 2017-03-06 10:44:12

Manhattan, thanx for solid feedback. Slug to dome while listening to ththe rapper. Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-06 16:34:16

fv both had solid punches I was feeling my winners approach a little more and trin take advantage of the new text editor bring out your bars make it more exciting to read anyway gb respect fvb if you can Voted: NostradaVus / Curfew
Posted on: 2017-03-06 20:10:03

Kwas...wtf are you smoking haha. Get off my nuts

Not Bad, dude he got fucked up by that mafia member!

Pretty obvious win here, one needs to step there text game up big time