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Posted on: 2017-02-27 21:13:31

Bnas: Started off decent but how does a whore bleed onions? That really threw me off, I see how you related him getting "chopped up" but there was no build up to how he's getting chopped up aside from the onions bit which I'm still confused about. Anyways, tear (tAIR) and Tier (tEAR) don't rhyme enough to be used as wordplay, I get the belly up expression but his store see nothing? His store will gain nothing or produce nothing but see? That's equally as stumping. Okay so you're apparently reading a book and ripping a page effects him how? TIP THE WAGE means he would be tipping his earnings because wage means a salary so that doesn't make sense either. Tip the wait staff or waitress. Anyways, putting those one right after the one really hurt you especially capitalizing as they're so similar it's not a good thing it's so easy. Last line was equally as confusing, so you're saying you'll fuck his girlfriend or whatever and then random waitress is going to lose her shit and shoot this guy? This whole verse is just non-coherent and doesn't make any sense tbh. You can obviously "style" the verse to look adequate and somehow you're #1 of all time purely based on volume but this verse is less then impressive, less then average, it's garbaro, I don't see how you thought this was a good drop if you did. With all that said, work on concepts first then relating everything, low 3. Phoboz: Very simple, not just because you didn't dress it up in typical LB fashion but very basic insults and statements that mostly talked about you. Try to direct more complex insults towards your opponent for more effect. Low 3 from me at this time but you show promise. Overall: Weak battle, expected more especially from Bnas but I've said my peace. One barely edged this with a verse that made more sense. Voted: Bnas / Phoboz
Posted on: 2017-03-02 17:22:30

Neither really hit too hard with punches, but Bnas had a couple jabs in there. I felt some of his multis were forced in places. Pho had a decent flow, and the rhyming was ok, but there was nothing overwhelming imo. Overall, an ok read, and it came down to who I thought attacked their opponent better. Fv in. No h8 Voted: Bnas / Phoboz
Posted on: 2017-03-03 08:13:25

Nice to see one holding it down here..I felt the one lacked in all catagories while the other just came with fire str8 up.. Voted: Bnas / Phoboz
Posted on: 2017-03-04 13:02:49