Expo: Act of Parliaments overwrite laws. Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-02-23 01:27:54

Macc: I fucked with this battle, this is a clear example of Maccs potential writing ability in comparison to the common sphere of opinion on such, and is an honest testament to why he should consider continuing only facing skilled opponents for a while. Enjoyed the fluid internal rhyming of your opener, though I subtly wish the crescendo for the 'quiet this infant' were slightly more impactful/relevant. The following nameplay/crew tie was cool. I'm tied on the last scheme, as I enjoy the confident writing, fluidity & personal aspect though the low-impact / how basic the wiping yo ass punch came off as kinda threw me off from the overall impact. Though, from that last scheme I can say I would like to see some macc audios. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-23 14:19:22

Doubt: Rocky start. PARAPLEGIC is five syllables / fair just beat it is four, but something further I'd like to point out is I lowkey have this issue too, but when your setups are as wordy & long just to include more setups it does come across as unnatural and semi-forced. The concept, however, was there & the set-ups were pertinent. Following this I feel like was an example of the opposite, the setups transitioned into the punch much more fluidly. I however feel like the crescendo concept for this one came off to me slightly less impactful punch-wise, though it made sense so thats more nitpicky opinion. The next two syllable scheme I thought was the low end for your verse, but still wasn't horrendous or anything. You ended stronger than the previous bar, but overall I feel like your concepts were hollow in their execution. Perhaps because of your perspective on maccs approach, but either way I believe you showed a more complex and polished approach concept-wise nonetheless. No hate intended, good spar Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-23 14:26:01

I recant my beginning statement and chalk it up to retardation. Paraplegic is demonstrably four syllables, lol Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-23 23:08:28

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Posted on: 2017-02-25 05:07:28

winner had slightly better structure and flow. loser actually had fresher concepts but didnt really put them together in the best way possible...alot of potential Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-25 13:51:49

Wow, surprising here, felt one came with better scheme work and multies and edged on puns as well slightly...no haymakers from either or out of the box concepts...pretty much a coin toss. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-25 23:05:39

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Posted on: 2017-02-26 02:16:38

mac had better flow, but very basic punches..ex.. quiet this infant, like a rattles in his mouth?.there was nothing clever or ironic at all with this comparison or simile.. you have so much potential with how smooth your structure is, all u need is to uo the creativity in how u flip your wordplay.. doubt- your problem is the complete opposite, flowwise was terrible imo.. the bars are too wordy so reads awful.. punchlines however had more thought put into it.. this was a true toss up, but i got one edging this ..decent battle Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Doubt
Posted on: 2017-02-26 04:10:35