One was put together like a pro. The other was ok... Punches went to one. Flow went to em to fv in Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-17 01:10:21

Aiight. Starting off with Lockhart, this was decent. I've seen quite a bit better verses from you, but that's understandable since you haven't battled in a while. Punches were decent, if not especially memorable, and the execution was okay. Only thing I feel like specifically mentioning is the "patch work will never cover I" concept - that's some textbook bad wording, since using "I" instead of "me" there is both grammatically incorrect and almost never said by anyone. No Honor: Ehh... I just wasn't feeling this verse for the most part. None of the concepts jumped out at me, the multis were a bit awkward in some areas, etc. The wording was also questionable in some areas... who would actually say "observe the better a tax return" in real life? I don't mean to call this verse bad, but it just wasn't written fluently enough for my liking. This was an alright spar. Fair's in. Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-17 11:34:11

Ok, Both battles came with some really nice concepts and punchlines. I felt like Lockharts flow was better and the punchlines hit that just little bit harder. Really good battle lads. i enjoyed reading both ! Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-17 11:34:26

Pretty onesided.. winner had better /solid punches great read multies flowed well.. overall gd shit ..loser open'r was horrible alot of iffy lines unmatched multies no offense his seem like u forced the reach tryn for the win & dropped the ball Fv in no h8 Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-17 15:18:45

Lock: Had some well thought out concepts as well as some simplier bars, opener was sick asf. No Honor: started off weak, wasn't feeling that nameplay bar, but the last half of your verse was pretty much all flame. Loved the meek and falcon lines. I think one was a tad bit more consistent as well as complex, was an entertaining read from both. Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-17 15:26:16

I thought one executed the wording a lot better here and had a much smoother read. fairs in Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-18 21:06:01

I got my winner off first read. My losers verse was very difficult to read and his punches didnt land as expected due to poor execution of fairly strong concepts. my winner had some nice nameplays and personals. i felt like he tried a bit too hard to make his scheme work and was confined to it to the point where the jabs leading up to the final pumch kinda killed the final punch, due to it being a bit outdrawn. nice battle nonetheless Voted: No Honor /
Posted on: 2017-02-19 21:37:39