This was close. Sentinel One was more consistent with his flow...until 'rogue islamists' broke the multi chain. First punch was ehh...2nd and 3rd were good but a more in depth setup on the photobomb line woulda made it even better. Slain carried his rhyme scheme with no issues. First bar worded a little wonky but really creative setup...'Sir, be on' WP a bit forced in my accent tho. 2nd bar was creative, final sets not as much so but decently executed. Both had a lot of good but one's mistake stood out more than the other's here to me. Posted on: 2017-01-28 09:42:51

Liked both, my vote had a smoother flow, along with hella wordplay, good ish from both noh8fv Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-27 06:06:36

SO had a better scheme and didn't seem as forced Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-27 12:27:56

Winner outshined in every aspect. Loved the schemes n wordplay although i feel maybe some of it was forced (maybe i just didn't get it). Loser had a lot of forced wordplay and multis and wasn't really punching at all. No hate, just keepin it 100. Fair vote's in, return the fair one. Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-28 13:13:30

I'm not really familiar with either of you two, but this was a good battle. Slain: The only major problem in this verse was that your wordplay didn't work both ways grammatically. It was good phonetically, but taken at face value, and it doesn't make sense. Make Ukraine your neck? You'll Crimea river? Those phrases don't make any grammatical sense. I liked your flow, the way you intertwined your references, and your strong last punchline. Sentinel One: Eh. The middle scheme was good, except for the last multi set, which was broken. ROGUE ISLAMISTS = 4 syllables. FOCUSED COMPETENCE = 5 syllables. That's not good. Your punches were decent, and your flow was solid, excepting the broken multi I mentioned. Anyway, good battle, but I have a clear winner. Fair's in. Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-29 14:23:54

Slain had nice lines tied in with amazing plays on words, but I feel Sentinel One altogether had more of a flow. Maybe that's just because of the way I read the two in my head. (That's what kinda sucks about text, tbh...) So, I gotta give Sentinel One the better rating. Altogether tho, a very close match. You both have a very similar style of lyricisim. Good shit. Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-29 14:41:59

One got this with more original wordplay but the other was coming with it as well with the greater syllable usage Voted: Schemez / Sentinel One
Posted on: 2017-01-29 16:52:45

I actually structured that islamic scheme under the pretense that "ISLAMACISTS" was a word. Which is five syllables, and completes the multi chain. But, it autocorrected at the last moment as its not even a real word. my b Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-01-29 20:26:56