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Posted on: 2017-01-25 15:28:50

Not exactly sure what this was supposed to be. Change, everytime it felt like you was about to go off, you didn't you got lost instead. But you had the multies and you came back with that last bar. Swagger, you started out strong and then fizzled out within the first bar. You had no multisyllabes, you didn't really have any metaphors or punchlines either. Change's punchlines were bad, but at least he attempted them. Your gown line is a little too vague.. You said you take his girl all over town and that's why you wear her gown? Not sure if you are saying you are his girlfriend or you were attempting to claim you took his girl from him? Then terror & barriers don't really rhyme.. I originally voted for Sawgger, off the first read, but after going through the advanced ratings and going back through each verse multiple times, I have to give it to Young Change by a split decision. Sawgger, even with some of your nonsensical lines, if you would have thrown even just 1 multi bar and attempted a metaphor or a punchline, you would have gotten my vote. Keep up the battles! Voted: Young Change / sawgger8
Posted on: 2017-01-25 20:05:41

I meant I was all in his girls gown Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-01-26 08:14:20

plus it was thats why you see me all in her gown as a understanding that I F**K her if you got the idea which kind of took you a while Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-01-26 08:18:39

Sawgger's opener was more solid Voted: Young Change / sawgger8
Posted on: 2017-01-27 01:07:57

Not a bad battle, the 2 have a lot of work ta do..in terms of strengthening the multies n flows..so ima have ta lean ta the one that was a lot beter in context The fair is tossed. Voted: Young Change / sawgger8
Posted on: 2017-01-30 06:24:54

One was basically a cypher for the first 5 lines and the other was average, neither was mad dope but one had a clearer battle structure and flow Voted: Young Change / sawgger8
Posted on: 2017-01-31 08:49:26