Close...one had a better writing style but the rhymes were single syllable and too simple at times. there was just shaky english in spots like the first bar. Saying things like the guy with the most battles is too new doesnt hit hard. Be meaner than that. The cadence is ok but u need to be more complex with your rhymes and try to up your punch count. The other is better than this...a couple punches but nothing too hard. Rhymed more complex than his opponent and had a more aggressive tone to his verse. Posted on: 2017-01-27 09:44:03

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Posted on: 2017-01-23 17:51:52

one had a more polished verse in all aspects. Voted: Skechy / Bnas
Posted on: 2017-01-24 03:15:57

Gb fv once came WAY harder Voted: Skechy / Bnas
Posted on: 2017-01-24 13:15:42

Gave it to one for attempting to write using a multi format and I understood the approach they were going for but with more fine tuning you'll be a lot better. The other usually has better stuff but I guess we have our 'off nights' too. Voted: Skechy / Bnas
Posted on: 2017-01-25 00:28:59

A solid showing from both,I gave the edge to Skechy on Metaphors, Vocab & Wordplay. I gave a tie vote on Multies & Punches, I think Skechy had some sneaky lines, I think it was his last bar that got him the win. I gotta go by averaging out my advanced ratings to a 4.8 for Skechy and a 3.4 for Bnas. Rounded out to a 5-3 win for Skechy. Very solid showing from both. I'd like to a see a bit more polished multi-syllable effort from Bnas. Skechy, I'd like to see a greater attempt at punchlines & multi-syllable bars. Keep battling! Voted: Skechy / Bnas
Posted on: 2017-01-26 14:55:18