One was a smoother read with a more creative concept. The other wasn't bad but the plays weren't as fresh and the wording was slightly off in one spot. Posted on: 2016-10-07 15:53:37

Won't sway felt my winners punch was more technical Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-05 19:48:52

you never know Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-06 03:55:31

Read this over a few times and feel my winner brought more to his verse.. Neither were knock out blows but decent.. Keep the activity going.. One got it.. Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-06 07:49:21

ok Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-06 12:01:58

Good guys, good Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-06 18:29:06

I felt one took long with the set ups ta get ta an initial punch..not bad concepts but I've seen them before just didn't hit hard as I know he wud..n the other came with fresher approach with short bar set up..took this with less filler too. The fair is in. Gud battle fellas. Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-07 04:41:34

cant lie it was close can go any way gb fv Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-07 11:58:44

fv Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-07 14:10:16

both were pretty weak.tbh felt shodan had a less awlward worded bar, lyve, your concept play 'only wade shell toes ' just didnt come off reading naturally.. the punch line did match but not reading right in both entrendes hurt your effort Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-08 00:21:59

Thought my winners bar hit harder. Voted: Shodan / Lyve SCIENCE
Posted on: 2016-10-08 10:01:40