This was kinda closer than it would have have been I felt..One did read smoother in parts but I felt the set ups didn't really relate to the end punch..I also felt u didn't have too many punches..It took u a while to get to ur first punch..Also u didn't fill the box all the way.. The other keeps forcing rhymes for the most part and the set ups don't really relate to ur end punch at times...But u did punch more...I'm kinda torn here..I going to go with the cleaner read..Though one did punch more..I felt others verse was more effective..The fairs in... Voted: U NiQue NeSs / Orochi
Posted on: 2016-07-08 08:03:10

Ness had some nice ideas, like his opener. It hit pretty well. As for the rest, the multies were a bit confusing and hard to follow. A more simplistic approach would have done you some good here. Also, that closer isn't what's up lol Snow, your response wasn't bad but it was too disorganized. A lot of the multies were either broken or just didn't make sense, making the read very choppy. Fair is in. Voted: U NiQue NeSs / Orochi
Posted on: 2016-07-08 16:40:06

Fuck Rushing tis verses lol I can't wait ta do Audio. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-07-08 19:37:40

Damnnn dope spar fellas both were on they shit the fairs in Voted: U NiQue NeSs / Orochi
Posted on: 2016-07-10 11:38:21