are y'all serious? Did y'all proof read at all? Man I'm so fucced mad both of y'all dropped like this fucc a expo. Fairs dropped. Y'all not taking this shit serious man. LB going to shambles...✌ Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-13 13:47:46

Both needs a lot work, multi game is ok, but I think cadence & flow needs much improvement, I felt one took a horrocore approach here with only metaphorical jabs, n used the Virgin line as his match weren't well executed, n the other had attempted wordplay with several lines tat at least manage a diss? Kool way ta start a verse but I felt after tat he declined the fair is in. Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-13 15:39:34

My loser had to many outdated bars and that lost him the battle to me. Gs from both tho. Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-13 21:56:59

Fv Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-14 09:48:42

Both of you guys have major potential and I'm confident both of you are on the right track. Nastik you grasp on the English language hurts your verse in parts which is really such a shame. Conceptually you aren't bad but you over complicate your bars a lot. Keep it simple and straight to the point and make sure your multis are in perfect English. Notorious you were better here. Your wordplay is perfect but it has a tendency to be basic in places which can lead to a very one dimensional punchline. Other than that you were decent, just be cautious of your multis. Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-14 21:39:38

thanks xplissit for the detailed vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-06-15 07:35:27

One just seemed to throw more understandable shots at his opponents directions L needs more direct punches to win in the future fv Voted: Nastik / NotoriousOne
Posted on: 2016-06-16 14:42:50