One was cramming multis too much that it obscured the fact he had a couple decent ideas and punches inside of his verse. Overall despite some high points, the drop as a whole was inconsistent with its impact and flow. The other kept it simple and was surprisingly solid with his schemework throughout. Punches varied in strength and originality but there was a fair amount of creativity mixed in and the impact was stronger overall than his opponent. Posted on: 2016-05-28 12:59:15

Gb fv vb Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-26 23:11:42

Okay, let's start with the loser. You have an idea of punches, that is great. However, you're really losing it in the Multies department. You don't need huge multi schemes to write a good punch. Don't let multies control your concepts, it just tones down on how well the punch lands. Also do not cap words that don't rhyme, it is kind of pointless and make it harder to read or connect because most people expect it to be a part of the multi set. Overall, your verse was more cypherish than an actual battle verse. Winners experience showed, but I assume he decided to slack because he used 'SPITTING CLEAN' so many times. It got annoying. Winner tbh edged this with better wording, and bars that actually conformed to the norms ot battle rap. FV is in Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-26 23:41:55

retarded low vote non expo deleted Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-26 23:42:14

Clever, Clever Verse. #impressed 💪💪💪✊👻 Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-27 02:50:21

Rappin like a G but u snitched on me to the mods. Eth ur out of charactor Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-27 19:07:30

Good battle. I felt like sky opened with some impressively large multis, but naturally with doing that it kind of ends up with your concepts jumping ALL over the place which makes for a less concise verse altogether. You picked it up after that by shortening a tad but overall I think that your verse was incredibly wordy and at times hard to gauge the flows, but the OBVIOUS effort was noted and the punch/conceptual grasps were there so it doesn't denote your overall verse that much. Just wish you would intertwine some less multi-intensive stuff in there to differentiate and contrast with the opposite which was so common. Eth started out with a similarly multi-intensive style, but showed the possibilities of where you could take that if you lower the multi count and carry the concept well to a crescendo. EtH seemed to come with a very raptor-esque approach in that the rhyming wasn't basic, wasn't game-changing but was maintained consistently enough to be impressive (as fuck now that I see its a schemed 32) and contained punches/concepts necessary to outshine the opponent from an offensively creative but concisely put writing standpoint. Was also impressively fluid to be schemed and punch-oriented. Good spar! No hate intended thank you guys for being active Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-28 16:31:58

LORD- i gotta say, you are very impressive with multis, im makin it known, there are alot of great ideas you come up with, most notable, the tower of babel line, on the lowerend of the sprectrum the four heads foreheads like public housing centers, .. they dont really relate to each other.. was there an incident where someone bashedsomeones head in one of those centers?, your simile just didnt connect with the phrase play.. , as far as multi usage, they range from dope to decent to crazy.lol.. but surprisingly you usually drop some unnatural worded multis, this time around they were for the most part well done.. now the problem is ,this wouldve been indeed a dope cypher, with all that self hype.. your job tho is to take the content and drop conceptual disses at your opponent, which you failed to do.. NOT- very very basic , multi usage, very, very, clean wording , very very basic punches, and jabs.. but delivery was clean, there were setups that were a bit random to the end punch but they worked......with that eth gets my vote for having a legitimate battle ready verse,... lord sky may have destroyed you with multi usage, but you took it decisively with punches.. fairs in Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-29 01:23:18

Eths flow was pretty sick all tje way through. He also had moderate vocabulary. Personally i liked his 14th punch it wasnt too bad, his 8th was a bit played out tbh. Lord skh was on some other shjt ... his 4th, 6th and 17th punch i felt won this battle. Fv Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-29 21:46:18

Yo what battle are these niggas reading ^ . Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-29 21:47:07

Had to Revisit this a few Times Amazing Wordplay from Both also two different Styles Clashing I could see it going Either way i felt my winner had the better punchlines but Both y'all Cats Were Smooth with it...Great Read and Battle fv No hate Voted: LORD SKY /
Posted on: 2016-05-29 23:20:30