This was difficult to judge. Notorious, you clearly have the basics down and your rhyming capabilities are exceptional. It leads me to believe you're a multi-account of someone, just not sure who. While there weren't any real "WOW" moments in your drop, it maintained a certain level of momentum that gave your verse a decent/good appeal. Oliver....dude.....I gotta be honest, you HAVE to improve in your multie-game bro. You've always had nice ideas and cool setups, but for christ's sake your damn multies have to some kind of relation (in rhythm, syllable count, congruency) or something. For example, MISMATCH END, CHICKEN SCRATCH SPIN, and CATCH AH WIN....they ALL have different syllable counts fam. That's what people mean when they say "broken multies." You're not a bad texter, but I say it on almost every one of your battles. If you have great ideas (which you do) but can't convey them well then it's pointless. Anyways, all that just to say your ideas here were alright, and had you tied them together with strings of multies that added flow instead of created choppiness then you would have edged it. FV is in. Voted: NotoriousOne / Orochi
Posted on: 2016-05-24 05:07:08

Tbh this was Horrible, because typos made it hard to Understand, the punches were almost non existent and the delivery was chippy. My winner did a SLIGHTLY better job. Fair as always... Voted: NotoriousOne / Orochi
Posted on: 2016-05-25 00:26:42

Hahahah! Fuck you MaCC Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-25 01:44:29