You should've sent that personal to Ill4. Kind of whack for an open. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-24 00:06:29

this was a close battle. my winner had an overall better flow and set ups, even if some of them were forced. my loser just needs better set ups, but i liked the flow as well. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Lizman
Posted on: 2016-05-25 21:13:47

MaCc: [Witty opener with the Angler pun, I kinda liked it. Could be a lowkey way of calling him ugly with just a alliterative play. Simple, casual, point. A jab at Ill4? Was this sent to the wrong person or posted as an open? lol. Finisher was about as strong as the opener. Solid verse, I think you could push your creativity a bit more but it's understandable for someone who cranks out 4 or 5 verses a day.] Liz: [Creative first bar intermingling the ideas of birds and guns. Decent punch. I got grilled on this so I'm grilling you on it, maybe be more accessible. I feel like you had an idea for the second/third bars it just didn't really develop too well or hit too hard in the end. Again, solid punch, solid flow. Your punches and flow are there, but the way you deliver hinders your creativity I think. You kinda just ramble aggressive multies with little more than intellectual and audi-aesthetic substance.] Close but one edged it, Liz think about adjusting the battle style to less cypher-y by adding more creative and direct punches. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Lizman
Posted on: 2016-05-26 14:23:01