the punches were more consistent on one side. the fair one is in their gents. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-24 00:10:15

I know nobody can see this... but the last bar.... Facade is pronounced "fuh-sod" it means to put up a front... hence, "pretend to run bitches" pretend to be pimpin. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-24 00:10:24

Macc-didnt understand what teeple is..first bar seems like more of a self hype line and should be avoided in a length constraint battle.. next bar again nice flow, decent multi spacing but lack of a concept or end punch to hit your opponent.. wasted space again bro.finally next line wit screen savor was a step uo, but couldve used a bit more wording in the quoted phrase play' to relate screen savor a bit more.. ex. im the 'last thing hes sees before blackin out'...screen savor.. that team flavors bar was prolly ya best bar easily line of the battle imo.. last concept had potential wit dry verse, but needed a bit more wording.. mark- brown nose dawg was a bit weak but funny.balls relating to pokemon very played, bro. make no sense was basic wordplay , but end multi was decent wasnt feelin the last fasod bar...but it was prolly ya most creative line.. imo. macc had a few punches that were decent but then he used the word team three times in the punch which seems a bit lazy in the multi side of things.. mark stayed consistent with concepts ,but majority ofem, was below your usual , esp the pokemon, balls flip.. that was a smh type ish.. withthat i give the slight edge to mark due to a combination of diverse multi usage and less wasted space in throwing jabs at his opponent .. if macc had used the first two bars and turned it into punches like the ones i enjoyed, this wouldve had a different outcome.. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-24 00:35:25

I felt one's took the opener, set ups n multi syl weren't off n the puns hit home n was consistent with fresh concepts n the other went in with the obvious approach n had 2 or 3 haymakers the fair is in. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-24 02:33:42

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Posted on: 2016-05-24 10:28:58

Very good battle was real close My w was more original with his bars fiys his style My Lwas nice here to but his wordplay lines were a bit basic "brown nose" puts sniffin eachother asses" didnt really wow me to much But fv Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-24 13:45:01

The W punched harder and more directly. L had rhymes and a few metaphors but felt like a cypher. You did jab him several times however. Good battle Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-25 03:18:29

Both was gassing No hate to Winner was going in my favorite line was HIDDEN GEMS IN POKEMON...BARS...Los er: Team Flavor//Shame you aint even half of a beast but can be found beside dry verse you cant boss from the passenger seat ...Raww Both keep doing yall thing again NO HATE Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-25 13:08:07

MaCc: [Decent punches, nothing too creative. Screen saver concept is iffy. Finished stronger & more creative than you entered, but execution could've been better for the finish.] Kramer: [Solid opener. Funny, creative follow up. Played concept with a pretty fresh take with a personal/nameplay jab. Solid closer.] remarK took it on pretty much all aspects. Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-25 17:07:02

Both came with it Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-25 21:56:39

One flowed better and came stronger IMO no h8 fv Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-25 21:59:14

fidel and ridla vote deleted due to poor insufficient expo Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-26 03:07:33

lordsky vote deleted due to insufficient expo Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / remarK
Posted on: 2016-05-26 03:08:35