for his better use of multies fused with punch's, Anonymous. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-24 13:36:36

I got zero voting power so dont worry about this vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-24 16:58:08

ANON: [Dude first bar was delivered not to shabbily. Basic concept and could've delivered it better. You stretched the idea, multies, and scheme more than you had to. It's almost like you're just shouting, there's little actual structure and creativity put into your verse until "Black Folks in the Fifties" and even that was a pretty basic and soft punch. Follow up with the hair puns wasn't bad, again execution for the idea could've been better. Decent closer with a nice personal jab. Solid verse, you just need to work on delivery; developing your punches and executing them effectively in context.] Row: Solid opener & follow up. Concept creativity & delivery were enough. Chu/smoke line was decent. Homeless/sense was a good follow up, solid bar. Weld wordplay was played but, again, enough. Ended on a personal. Solid verse overall, I feel like you cranked out one to get it.] Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-26 14:38:34

this was an amazing display by both parties.. anonymous- I think you are avery talented battler, I can tell by the finesse you put in your punchlines..very dope, I enjoyed the backrow in the 50s punch.. very original, also corn row.. ROW- I very much liked your multi work, punchlines was excellent as well, I enjoyed the wreck in bawl wordplay, and the tai chi vibe... this was very very tough, and I can see this goin either way...I think I'm edgin it to row, for slightly more creative word combinations.. great battle and big thumbs up Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-26 22:48:26