Im Still not back at 100% yet but it's progress ... good luck my nigga Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-21 19:45:27

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Posted on: 2016-05-22 14:45:16

I felt one came with nice material but it was a little played out. Also I still think he should spend a little more time setting up his punchlines instead of having them come so abruptly. There were a lot of bars throughout that could have hit harder if it was a completely executed line but I felt a lot of them were rushed. Taking time to develop your punches is important to most. To the other, a nice drop as well and your opener was pretty legit. I also enjoyed how you kept the same scheme all the way through while also sticking to the concept. Enjoyed the read fellas. Fair vote is in. Voted: Rain Matrix 1 / Celsius
Posted on: 2016-05-22 14:58:12

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Posted on: 2016-05-22 15:07:52

Rain:: [Solid first bar, not too creative but I understand. Didn't know Cel was asian. Felt like the Plumbing jab could've been expanded on but decent filler. Rue Barb line was like creative I guess but a weak punch, if anything you dissed yourself for regretting to jump a fence. Next bar is decent. Giant/Bee Hive bar isn't bad, more of a filler than a punch. Next bar not bad. Watch specific references, you might leave the audi out of the loop. Next line's pretty kewl. Celebrex line is a decent concept, execution was eh. Having nothing to do with Celsius isn't much of a diss as it is a simple observation. Overall, delivery & structure isn't bad. Creativity is there but could be further developed, I think you just need to mature your execution of your punches a little more to hit a little harder.] Cel:: [Solid opener bar, maybe a little stretched. Decent filler to a solid Hue Hef line. Detonator Waist line was solid, feel like that should've been the end to that scheme rather than the beginning. Elevator line picks it back up, solid punch. Escalator line kept the head boppin!! Way to develop a concept. Finisher was decent. Overall, solid concepts, solid verse. Delivery maybe could've have been smoother, but didn't bother me.] Voted: Rain Matrix 1 / Celsius
Posted on: 2016-05-22 19:09:00

Punch for Punch, Cel was harder overall. Both had pretty dope concepts and one enjoyable read. Good to see some older heads still around. Good shit Rain & Cel. Voted: Rain Matrix 1 / Celsius
Posted on: 2016-05-23 21:11:17

this was a great battle both had nice multies but as both were consistent and celsius had longer syllables with consistency he edhged it here also he had some great punches and creative concepts both are fire emcees and it was a great battle to judge and could go either way tbh i got my winner by an edge Voted: Rain Matrix 1 / Celsius
Posted on: 2016-05-24 02:55:55

i was gonna vote cel but reading closer. rain matrix just had too much flavor for me to vote against him. Voted: Rain Matrix 1 / Celsius
Posted on: 2016-05-24 13:30:32