Star wars, Toyota: Lets Go places. Gl Rain Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-14 19:52:26

good stuff man gl! Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-19 20:44:51

Felt like one understands the concept of structure, but needs to improve at it. There were many forced multies and forced multies ultimately makes your verse and your bars hard to follow. To the other, nice response, and decent use of all the basics (structure, multies, setups, punches). The only thing is conceptually you were a tad bit weak. You presented the ideas very well with good set ups and good delivery, but the concepts and ideas themselves were played out a bit. Just my opinion. Votes in. Good battle fellas. Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-20 04:30:36

My winner was consistent and smooth Throughout his verse, He had nice Punches and Delivery, My loser needs to execute his shit Properly and make it tight Cos i feel it could be a lot better. FV Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-20 06:44:23

Felt one was way slow n had gud set ups but the execution + wordplay let him down, gud attempt thou n the other went all out punch after punch nice fluidity too, the fair is in. Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-20 13:14:16

Felt like one was trying to bring concepts to the table but didn't read smooth in places..I felt that kinda messed up your verse as a whole...The other read smoother and had decent execution but had things that were played in areas..Anyway got one the fair is in Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-20 20:05:06

rain.. what is up with your setups?..short as hell, i dont even consider them setups because theyre pretty much all random wit tge exception of losers puffing, which related to your concept in a cohesive idea..rest were played to shit.. doix.you kinda got the idea of concepts but they either didnt make much sense or were quotated for little reason. multi work was musmatched and poorly done .. for those reason.. rain gets the nod for better flow.multi and concepts. Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-21 03:33:58

closer one fv gb Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-21 19:19:39

Doox:: [Must L is forced. Light saber wordplay is equally cliche. Not terrible concepts but definitely not not hard hitters. The first is the strongest, second is stretched. Finisher not bad! Overall, you know what you're doing, just work on developing your concepts more creatively and impactful. Delivery could use some attention as well.] Rain:: [Diggin Doox & Dutches bit. Better concept than impact. Timber/Xmas Dinner, not a bad filler(?) Batting cages pretty funny! Evaporation line, again better concept than impact. Delivery & concepts were sound, punches had more potential than they were executed, I think.] Voted: DooX / Rain Matrix 1
Posted on: 2016-05-22 18:31:35