One was a solidly written verse with some creative ideas and a good flow but nothing that hit crazy hard. The other was simpler in his rhyme scheme and his ideas. Some of it wasnt bad but strength of jabs was inconsistent and didnt flow as well as his opponent. If dude is rusty, Im sure he'll be fine after awhile. ezonm Posted on: 2016-04-27 16:14:18

First one of the season. Still a bit rusty but I still got it, obviously. NoHate only fair votes. Good job and good luck and always +Respect to the contribution. Good battle Bones, let's see whats up. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-27 01:54:08

winner was better with the concepts n flow. Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-27 01:58:08

one was a lil more complex wit it, the other was basic but had good moments. fv Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-27 03:05:06

I feel like a basic verse really depends on the way it flows. In the sense that it stays on-point, consistent, and every multi has a punchline. Basic nonetheless but I will take it as a lesson learned. Ya'll want us to rattle your noggins with more complexity, you got it. Haha Gb keep up the Fv's Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-27 09:02:08

Nice battle Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-27 16:49:32

Not a great battle I felt one had smooth flow with jabs n not so hard hiting punches, sum of the concepts are old as roman army but he had complexity working out for him n the other didn't realy go for broke n fell short n needed ta put more punch umph in it the fair is in Troll's vote.. Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-28 03:41:18

I get the bars were basic but I am sensing some of you are mislead on how this was suppose to be read haha. I should have actually provided an MP3 Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-28 15:55:39

Anyway good battle Bones. I can take a loss but I admit I still think my bars were just fine. 'Cause I meant them to be simple Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-28 15:56:37

one was smoother and jabbed, no hays but kept it solid, the other tried the rebuttal route and kinda fell off, fv Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-28 16:29:04

and blazed, i read it exactly how u wanted it to be percieved, if u read this to a beat, it would flow perfectly i did it in my head already, but for text, its just not enough battle audio bro, text is stupid anyways Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-28 16:32:11

Haha, I read his bars to a beat just know and fair and square it does flow better. No hate ova here, good battle ya'll. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-04-28 21:33:14

bones , flow wise it was a solid effort, wording was minimal in each line and the pauses and internals kept it moving right along. dope ish..wasnt too punch heavy, felt a bit more cypherish, but again one element more than made it up.. blazed, flow was fairly impecable as well despite the simplicity in bars, each line count was the close to the same syllable count per stanza, so it rolled off the tongue well. punchwise again very similar to bones that you seemed to not emphasize that aspect as well.. this was a nice shocase by both on fundamental flow and stricture.. my winner had better content and complexity was also a notch above.. fairess beuler Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-29 00:26:30

Winner for me killed it loser was good but wasn't really feeling the flow....no hate keep doing yall thing Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-29 12:03:43

This was nice, both of you got mad talentz with tha written game...close battle, felt B hit em harder tho MUCH RESPECT Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-29 19:19:35

Shit I meant to click Bones on that haha Voted: BonesRecordz / DjNarcotize
Posted on: 2016-04-29 19:21:39

^ LOL Awwee dawg reading that was hilarious. I was all like, "At least I got one vote" ahahaaa dayum nigga. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-13 13:28:34