That's that lethal shit...#dieinvein mufucker Posted on: 2016-05-15 09:57:33

That verse was hot dude. Posted on: 2016-05-16 07:54:48

expo:his crew nickname is IDGAF... ,he made me leader of his crew a year ago, when he was by himself, and i recruited everyone on his roster ,except natshubby...2.ken griffey jr. is a HOF baseball player, 3.stagecoach wheels are made of wood..4.his crew pic is smokey from the movie friday.. smokey the bear is a mascot that protects forests from fires..5. he got smashed from reefer and mikey deniro.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-15 02:24:58

Alright....I have to break this down slow. I read it verse for verse, bar by bar, and every line for its own. I felt that you two both have your strong areas; one of you is an expert in multies while the other is an expert conceptually and with personals. With that being said, I felt both of you had great flow, rhymeschemes, and punchlines. However, one of you used a significant amount of filler more than your opponent, which allowed your opponent a little bit of leverage as far as the number of punchlines and personals in his verse. And of course, more punchlines/personals means a more hard-hitting verse from my perspective. DaDDio, your working grave yard shifts punchline and sirius recognition punchline were masterful. Illo, your teams in the indy-5, female with him to try, and blunders in high waves puns were excellent. All in all I really enjoyed both reads but I had to pick one. Vote is in, and hopefully respected. Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-15 03:04:23

Close !!!!! Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-15 13:21:54

oh.. and deebo, craig, and big worm are all portrayed as tough guys in the movie FRIDAY ... smokey acts like a scared lil bitch throughout.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-05-15 14:01:11

First read through, good shit. I'll come back and re-read again before i vote. Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-15 19:25:56

You guys went in for real..Not gonna lie both had personals and general bars a like..Eeek ones ending had me surprised I am dbz guy..Liked u how u did that scheme..My Thing was I felt u had a bit filler spots in your verse...to the other u were nice to some spots didn't read as clean though but I felt u jab more...This is to close to call but I am gonna edge it to who landed more hits..Could go either way..This is what the site needed..Best battle I read in a while the fairs in.. Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-15 21:09:18

ima try not to sway so if yall want further expos pm me. One had 2 haymakers that were both better than anything in the other guy's whole verse, and overall it was a smoother read too, but he also had a lot of filler, and less direct personals. One was more consistent with hit after hit and each line was a a lot more stacked creatively with wp's and internal shit, but there was some stumbling for me while reading it, and like I said, nothing in the verse wowed me the way those 2 haymakers did. that's all ima say I wont explain my decision in detail, pm me if ya want Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-16 04:46:08

FuCcin Epic. #NoSway But the Punches Were The Determining Factor. #HatsOffToBoth 🖕 a Hater! fairs! Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-16 05:13:15

Deleted swaying comment from Rain Matrix, there was no vote Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 01:45:00

Hope big expos didn't go out of style, it honestly makes it easier for me to critique. DaD "He claims I'm 'lacking activity-n-heart'.. But my BREATHING RHYTHM IS FINE so it'll take an 'asystole on his death bed' for him to REACH THE 'FINISHING LINE' Beeeeep!" > Good idea, pretty solid delivery. I'm getting the gist that you're a fatty and ILLo is even fatter? Nice. Personal. Good jab. "- that's the sound as this round exposes the LETHAL GIMMICKS HE WRITES like what's the deal? do ya'll KEEP SYRINGES DESIGNED for DEEP INCISIONS ASIDE? I think his 'circles just full of lip', your slogan should READ: INDIGENOUS TRIBE cos being a 'cookie cutter team 'doesn't make the dosez special' like WEED FROM CLINICS DENIED in KEEBLER BUSINESS SUPPLIES/" > Pretty solid carry out, I'm not sure that weed-keebler line hit as hard as you wanted it to. Maintaining that rhyme scheme seemed to overpower your punches. But consistent delivery. "this is where we start 'questioning your character' - PEEP HIS RIDDLER DISGUISE like what does the blood in that NEEDLE PICTURE DESCRIBE? the BLEEDING SYMPTOMS IMPLY the only thing 'Lethal you panzies bring to the people' is the HI-V YOUR GIVING THE SITE or they could be steroid injections ...(?).... not cos you GEEKS ARE BIGGER THAN LIFE but because you like 'taking it up the ass' and are 'WEAK AS SHIT FOR YOUR SIZE!!'/ > Again, I feel like you're just stretching the scheme a tidbit, but you keep it consistent. Jabs are there, no real haymakers. Just bringing the fatty down. "so what gave you the NERVE TO PLACE A COMMENT n' asSERT MY PAGE w/ NONSENSE? acting like I'm 'afraid to get these hands dirty' just cos every VERSE YOU PASTE IS DOG-SHIT example: the BIRDS YOU NAMED FOR CONCEPTS' it's funny.. cos that proves you'll 'cater to bars for a Cock n' Swallow' like you EARNED YA WAY THROUGH COLLEGE by SERVING GAYS COLADAS/ Is that why u 'threw a link up' on my page? Cos u enjoy 'reGURGITATING SAUSAGE??' or did u LEARN YOUR 'TASTE FOR GARBAGE' was the 'WURST TO MAKE US VOMIT' since the TURKEY FRANK WAS STARTED!/ Eughk!" > Flow good, some humor, some more jabs. No real wow factor yet. I'm kinda just boppin my head. "I asked him "so ..have any of those TOURNEYS PAID YOU PROFIT? I'm SURE YOU MADE DEPOSITS? right?' he said 'No.. But when I bust a rhyme it 'counts as double time".. plus I'm WORKING GRAVES FOR MOD SHIFTS!!!/ HAH!" > I fucks with this punch. Wordplay, incorporating dialog and environment. Creativity at its peak so far. "so how can we FEAR OR RESPECT YOUR IMAGE? the (L)ettuce (B)acon n' (T)omato King? 'no wonder' cos CLEARLY HIS 'BREAD IS MISSING' you have no cadence.. swagger.. entertainment factor.. just WIERD IN THE HEAD w/ WRITTENS even your 'texts 'reads back to us as monotone' Consistent, I didn't get a whoa factor, but they're well delivered solid creative impacts. Virginity is not very daddio.. Balancing out the personal jab scale here. A tidbit more indirect though. "shoulda LAYED LOW WIT THEM WRITTENS YA GOT,but since ya 'harpin to try me on' ,i packed a HALO,WINGS,TO GIVE HIM A JOB with ANGELS IN THE KINGDOM OF GOD, and if i gotta deSCRIBE YA TEAM as any 'TYPE A BEAST',how about SCAPEG.O.A.T.S WIT A BILLY ON TOP,even though a NICER THEME 'more fitting is :ASS'like its J-LO,KIM, OR NIKKI MINAJ tryin to CHANGE CLOTHES IN A BIKINI SHOP!!/" > Consistent. Harp/angel shit (if I understood right) was kinda corny but it fills for the better humorousish end-note. "its STRANGE THO,..KID IS DISSIN MY DROPS,yet made me leader just to SAVE YO' CLIQUE,OFF PITY I GOT,so be THANKFUL BITCH FOR FILLING YA SPOTS,and knowin which members you 'need that wood add on to ya circle's edge',same way a STAGECOACH IS WHEN DRIVEN ALOT!/(would)" > Clicheeee. Kinda. The personal jabs help. Understandable filler. "and ya girl?..gave me BRAIN SLOW, SWITCHED POSITIONS TO SLOB, for 'long stretches' like a SNAKE'S THROAT IS WHEN DINNER IS CAUGHT, til the DAME CHOKED WIT THE INCHES I GOT, so i gave her 'mug, shots after a rest',even tho that FACE POSE IS A PRISONER'S JOB!!/" > Brings it up, consistent delivery and creativity. "ima do a 'number on his circle'and show THIS FUCKER HOW PI TASTES,so lets see,there's 'big worm, deebo or craig',I could LIST OTHERS WHO'D FIGHT GREAT,but this nigga 'bared smokey',like his forest IS UNDER SOME BRIGHT FLAMES,so I was like wtf?'N WONDERED FOR CHRIST'S SAKE, 'did-some-research', and that 'hit from reef hurt'more than BIG BLUNDERS IN HIGH WAVES,even mikey threw his'wait around til you died'like ITS BUZZARDS THAT FIND PREY,i guess any VET ON A STREAK WILL put an'END TO HIS WEEK'SKILLS,which explains CHRIS TUCKER FROM 'FRIDAY'/" > Nothing really stands out or hits too hard here. Just fight jargon and reaching references. Flow stays consistent tho. "better 'call a priest' at the TIME OF MY VISIT, cause 'isle walk with arms tucked next to dad',like BRIDAL TRADITIONS,til IM IN POSITION, to 'open up on chest', like the TYPE OF COMMITMENT, you'd FIND IN AN INFANT when DINING ON WOMEN!!/" > Pretty solid finish to come back on. Overall still kept in consistent as well, delivery, creativity, etc. etc. I appreciate my shout out at the end. Overall, good delivery throughout. Both talented fo sho. Winner came with harder impacts and execution. Close 'un! Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 07:32:41

Fuck sorry for the shitty format, happy deciphering. Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 07:33:49

One came with personals, and stayed consistent throughout conceptually, although one or two puns weren't thta hard hitting imo. Other verse didn't pick up steam until the middle of his verse which was straight fire, very clean structure but the beginning had many concepts i've seen before. Thought your last couple closing bars could of been harder hitting. All around great job by both and I can see why you both deserve a HOF spot. fair Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 14:01:13

I had to read both twice. Nice shit! Some nice lines from both.. gave me BRAIN SLOW, SWITCHED POSITIONS TO SLOB, for 'long stretches' like a SNAKE'S THROAT IS WHEN DINNER IS CAUGHT, til the DAME CHOKED WIT THE INCHES I GOT ...lol This was nice from the first verse: I asked him "so ..have any of those TOURNEYS PAID YOU PROFIT? I'm SURE YOU MADE DEPOSITS? right?' he said 'No.. But when I bust a rhyme it 'counts as double time".. plus I'm WORKING GRAVES FOR MOD SHIFTS!!!/ Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 16:48:57

Fucking yes. I loved this battle. My winner had punches and punches that kept on hitting harder from the start. Some of them just had me in awe. My loser had a decent start and mid and picked it up real nicely towards the end, but lacked that consistency of hard punches that my winner had. This is probably the first time Im giving out such high ratings too Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 18:14:47

Great battle one edged it fv Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 20:49:05

Close battle My winner had more hits and stayed more aggressive and creative although the loser had a couple of haymakers that I was really digging. I thought one was just more consistent. Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 21:47:51

Vote Voted: DaDDiO / ILLoKWENT
Posted on: 2016-05-17 21:48:35

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Posted on: 2016-05-18 20:05:00

Shit I hope that verse isn't lost