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Posted on: 2016-03-16 23:32:36

Both had inconsistencies sometimes the rhyming was decent but then reverted to very simple rhymin...This was close going with more aggressive verse as the other's verse was a bit too casual in mood.. Voted: SpareTyme / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-17 00:20:40

sparetyme got this one ...over 2 syllables..wasn't impressed with either...good job to both hope to see both elevate Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-03-17 00:40:21

Both were basic in all categories..going with the one I felt was better at dissing, since none of you had actual punchlines. Read some battles around letsbeef to get a better grasp of battling. 1 Voted: SpareTyme / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-17 16:39:32

One had a pretty great showing near the earlier part of his verse, flexing the flow a little bit, although the punchlines were alright, the technical ability was there a bit. One got a little carried away on one rhyme set for too long when it clearly outlasted its stay. The other had a pretty cool concept round but the execution was poor because the entire verse there was no clear cut punches. Personally I prefer going bar heavy and pack of every punch in, but i do think telling a story can be effective if its funny and if you can create some good comparisons scattered in there, and only then will it work. Both have pretty nice potential with their skills but okay battle here. FV Voted: SpareTyme / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-19 20:30:08