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Posted on: 2016-03-14 22:02:12

One had kinda a weird structure using -- to emphasize the rhymes..The punches also weren't really strong but u put more thought into them then your opponent The other needs to learn the structure of this site, as well as up the rhymes, and punches...I feel one took this the fairs in. Voted: Bnas / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-15 15:51:42

Got kinda the same vibe too. One had a unique rhyming structure which is cool to see the creativity but i felt like the next time you applied that same structure it didn't land properly. Also had a more clear format to their verse. What the other lacked in terms concepts they almost made up for in their terms of flow. Focus on being more creative and dont be to concerned about being too descriptive. Decent showing here guys. FV Voted: Bnas / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-15 16:55:32

One had a battle verse the other attempted a battle verse. Loser needs actual punchlines instead of direct disses, which are better for longer battles. Got my vote in. Voted: Bnas / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-15 21:21:21

ILL, nice drop. Not much to say about it except I would start using better multies that are more creative. Colossal not a bad response but remember, a good text verse needs structure and punchlines. You have nice lines bro, and some cool ideas too, but someone who has great ideas but can't convey them clearly and effectlively ultimately won't get the recognition. But nonetheless keep battling man. Voted: Bnas / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-16 02:41:57

Thanks for the feedback, and ocelsius whats the difference between punchlines and direct disses? Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-03-16 12:46:34

Riffs....YEAH RIGHT! Comment Only
Posted on: 2016-03-16 20:21:25

Direct dissing someone is like "You only get votes because you're ILL4" your just dissing him without the present of any sort of punchlines, A Punchline is a simile meant to be witty, clever or funny. Voted: Bnas / ColossalMini
Posted on: 2016-03-17 17:26:58