Winner superior in all areas. Didn't have the punch count of his opponent but it didnt matter. Had the more clever bars and better flow. Loser had some ideas that needed to be executed better and got wordy in between his multis. Low-Low Posted on: 2015-12-26 09:15:39

Who was this for? Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Kooley
Posted on: 2015-12-24 00:10:26

Im saying! Lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 00:29:14

Houston is known for NASA and before blasting a rocket off they have a countdown. If you need an expo hit me up before vote Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 03:00:15

Mac, good drop here. I could tell it was meant for someone, copied & pasted from an older battler, or just an unused verse for a tournament or something. Either way it flowed well and although some parts were choppy it wasn't so bad that it brought your verse down. Kooley, respect for stepping up to a vet. I feel you have a little bit of polishing to do though. I can tell you have some nice ideas, but you might be holding them back for the sake of trying to be generic. Push the envelope more. Be more creative and use better multies. Your multies here seemed basic and brought you down a bit. Just my honest opinion. Vote is concealed. Please respect it Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Kooley
Posted on: 2015-12-24 03:32:13

my multies where actual punchlines tho if you can understand and keep up Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 08:58:31

expo- 'when I get MAD RUDE I'll CLAP DUDES that's not a SLAP FOOL. (CLAP MEANS SHOOTING, BUT an actual clap sounds like a slap. "I'M dropping shells all over this nut, CASHEWS. (Thats the very next line, referring to the gun dropping bullet shells over him which he is a NUT,(NUTS with shells = cashews) "This noodle will get his brains meatballed and RAGU'D" ( I was referring him to a noodle which can be another word for a lame. and meatballs,ragu, and noodles are the ingredients to spaghetti. ragu is red sauce that looks like blood and the meatballs represented the chunks of his brain in pieces. And thats something you cant order at a fast food place. BUT I said "he got it" meaning he got shot its connecting to the previous line. like he ordered from the menu on a drive thru and to pick up the food you have to go to the WINDOW. The rest you should get. All my shit is wordplay you have too slowly read it. its like a puzzle it connects i'm not just rhyming words Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 09:17:01

With my accent "OPPONENT" and "WANT IT" rhymes by the way. I pronounce "want" more like "won't" Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 09:21:07

FAG CLUE - SHIT,DICK,ASS. Use your imagination. I shouldn't have to explain it but some people think i'm coming super light so I have to point out the stuff that seems to be nothing Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 09:24:17

You tryna too hard with the Expo's. You don't have to explain all that. I understood it on first read. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 14:51:07

You mad? Take this L Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-24 16:34:30

Kooley your lines 100%, trust me it's just the structure man ... The fast food line was nice but that way it was put together for the reader was ah tad . Awkward . MAC: THAT LAST LINE WON THIS LOL FV IN Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Kooley
Posted on: 2015-12-24 17:32:44

Dis was one-sided as well. Bcuz my winner's punches was kinda consistent until da end. Wasnt dat hard-htting IMO. But nice attempt tho. My loser, gotta set up ya punches within ya bars. But not bad. No h8. #KeepGrindin' Voted: Thaa MaCc Era / Kooley
Posted on: 2015-12-24 20:32:02