One had an extremely personal approach but the setup was iffy...especially after reading the expo. more relevant tie ins woulda made this hit harder. The other was a fresh idea as far as when the reference happened but the wordplay seemed like it was just thrown in there and the second part was type wordy. going with the one whose angle had more impact. Posted on: 2015-12-21 22:07:11

expo - he said in forums he was 'ghosting for a while // dream , wake up , smell the coffee , cost coffee - 'roasted' coffee beans . gl rican Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-20 22:09:22

A personal vs and extremely fresh concept...Didn't think I would see a miss universe line this soon...Since that incident just happened yesterday...I am gonna have to come back to this one. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 20:19:48

One had super played wordplay but their bar was more personal and was mostly relevant through out the whole bar. Other had a better closer but their whole bar wasn't relevant through out. This was a close one, I'll come back to this. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 20:32:07

Hmm. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 20:34:10

this is very tough. both a bit opposite to each other in strengths and weaknesses. COFFIN- i did like the fact U went personal.. the problem i had with your setup was it just wasnt too relavent to your concept which was coffee beans,or coffee.. had you referenced a bit more references in regard to your concept , this wouldve exponentially strengthened your bar even more.. as wordplay, its slightly forced ,probably cause of accents.. i pronounce it bin.. a bit simple but it works... RICAN-i applaud the originality in your concept.. your setup worplay is very played but relavent to your concept. it reads a bit awkward tho and unnatural when reading aloud.. how does someone mistaken your crown.. it just doesnt read well in both entrendes.. also the multis were a bit slanted as well . hmmmm. i think im gonna edge this with one that had a few more elements that hit closer. good battle to both.. and its a coinflip really Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 21:24:11

Close call but in a one bar, the creativity and overall concept weigh heavily to me. That's why I went the way I did. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 21:40:17

I got one barely edging do to the concept alone..Tho one did come personal which I did appreciate the fair is in... Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 21:56:37

Both where nice . Personal idea vs a fresh TV event ... Fv is in fellas no h8 Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-21 23:13:53

Light punches from both, but I felt one took this with a better concept. As simple as that for me. Please respect it. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-22 00:00:29

Dooopppee fv Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-22 13:57:03

Alright re-read them and had to go with the better concept. Super close battle. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-22 18:34:31

better punches Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-22 21:15:37

CLEVERRRRR!!! Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-22 22:19:53

One had ok multis, a nice jab...the other had broken multis and didn't flow as nicely. Thought I would of seen better from both. Voted, Fair. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-23 02:18:35

After about 10 reads each i've made my decision. Coffin ya 1st two multies didn't relate to the punch and the actual punch's wordplay isn't anything fresh. Rican ya entire 1st half bar didbn't relate to bar very well and shoulda been worded way differently and set up differently. close but i got a winner. Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-23 20:47:59

fv Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-24 19:01:18

Kinda one-sided. But my winner's one hit-a-quitta did it fa me. My loser was kinda lame wit' it. Neither was hard-hitting, dont get me wrong. But a decent punch is what counts. No h8. #KeepGrindin' Voted: COFFIN DODGER /
Posted on: 2015-12-24 22:15:49

This was a dope bout, sorry I missed dropping a vote! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-25 23:54:24