Fair one is in. I'm going through the whole closing soon list and voting on all of them so if you have more than one in the list then you'll see this again. Posted on: 2015-11-28 23:24:30

One had some ideas but they weren't put together in a way to make them hit as hard as they could have. Mid. The other started off strong, dropped a couple good bars, then checked out knowing he'd done enough. Low. Posted on: 2015-11-29 08:44:15

one edged it fv gb Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-28 22:41:19

Dtdabeast: Your concepts where good. Need some work/help on executing them to their potential. Lot of concepts that could of been made into solid bars, where left as one liners. Not much connection between your bars & concepts. With some work you could become real nice with it. Shodan: Opening line was a contradiction. After that, some nice concepts that were worked out well. Second half you seemed to veer off. It's like you wrote for an 8 and then quickly keyed up the second half of it. The fairs in, i'm out. Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-28 22:43:31

I hear you Fuel .. but its the GANG ... DoPEFLO Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-28 22:55:59

Good battle. Overall I think one stood out a bit more. The loser verse started off good but didn't end well enough to take the win. The winner was consistent with the bars even tho some were a little far fetched. Fv Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-29 09:23:12

one had some awkward sounding wps and too many whiffs on his punches. other was cleaner although with less creative concepts. Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-29 11:20:17

DAMN CLOSE ONE HEAR FV IN GOOD SPAR Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-29 17:46:02

subpar from both of you, DTDA- for the most part multis were aight, what troubled me was your lack of relavence and cohesion between setup to punchline.. ex. your first bar.. you start off by sayin shodan lost change by battling you.. wtf does that even mean? how did he lose change? then when you go toward the following line, you say that you gonna catch sho like timed events,.. the only thing thats vaguely relavent in the first line to the next is that sho needs to find some sense and not battle you..or hell get shot, this as a gun bar was weak as hell... the only redeeming thing was the name flip which works but basic at best... the rest was worse as far as cohesive ideas to start and complete the punchline.. work on that relationship and youll improve.. also work on better wordplay, hot pro teen was forced to hell... SHODAN- you seem to have extended your setups alot more to the point your punches lose steam.. and same problem with you is the irrelavent setups, and emphasis on multi rhymes toward the end.. your redeeming quality here is the punchlines were a bit more creative.. both had ups and downs but one edged this here, with a mix and utilization of more elements that more effective.. Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-29 18:20:24

Only way he was a "Hot pro teen" is eating "CAJUN FISH"/ And his chick, all on my 'web' dis "spite her man" on some "AMAZING SHIT" DoPeFLO Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-29 20:48:38

One has concepts but needs to keep them relevant all the way through..flow was decent enough....The other slacked in certain parts but still kinda out did his opponent for the most part...Not the best from both seen better from them but the fairs in Voted: Dessaline / Shodan
Posted on: 2015-11-30 21:15:37