One's schemework was really good. Well structured verse with pretty original concepts throughout, the strength of which varied a bit though. Not a bad bar, I kinda laughed, but directing a punch a general group of people, none of which end up being the opponent, wasn't the most effective way to close up and made this closer than it would have been. The other took advantage of knowing who he was battling. Started off slowly and got a bit wordy in between multis at times. Picked up steam toward the end and had a couple of my favorite bars of the battle. Consistency ended up deciding this though....a couple more at the beginning that hit more like those at the end coulda swung it the other way. Good shit fellas. Posted on: 2015-11-20 17:04:36

Wow here's two different styles of writing here. Daddio : your first few bars were quite underwhelming imo they kinda didn't feel to brazy. I was shocked in a sense to the fact that i couldnt feel em. But some more so than the other. Subs you had more of the better constructed straightforward punch to punch and you transition pretty smoothly here. Your had more of the punches i feel here. Both had a great read but ones bars hit more for me. Close. My vote. My opinion. One. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-17 23:11:41

Common birth defect from agent orange is spina bifida, single Jack/hammer/titanic/ he puts condoms over bananas in his sex Ed class, his girl sucked my dick and got a sore throat/ the new letsBEEF era loves anime and gets off to sailor moon porn/ the square voting scrubs, with the exception of a few, are mentally challenged subway workers Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-18 00:01:29

Daddio how did u know I get off by watching sailor moon...That comment was hella funny though...Anyway good luck to both #GetWrecked Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-18 01:20:22

It was ah OK battle . Both had some 7 - 8 grade. Punches thrown around . Bar for bar one was fresher .. some old lines made New by another . Fv in . Ones flow got Da vote . Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 08:12:35

As far as punches, you guys were pretty much equal, I gave it to one because their punches were used within a 7 syllable rhyme scheme that was kept throughout the whole verse. Best battle I've seen on this site so far Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 10:14:09

After multiple passes, my assessment. Daddio: Multis were strong from start to finish. You had some fresh concepts and also put unique spins on some otherwise played ones. Your drop started slow, but hit more and more as it progressed on. Sub: The opening lines leading up to the punch didn't seem conceptually building towards the punch.. if that makes sense. Your multi game was fairly strong and you had some interesting concepts and pretty clean punches.. Overall, my winner edged it by having less filler and some cooler concepts/execution. Fv in. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 14:04:29

Well, this was the dopest battle I've read in a minute. DaDDiO: This was ridiculous throughout. Your punches were mostly fresh, and all effective. Some concepts were partially forced, but still worked. Your multies were less slanted than usual. You weren't wordy, keeping a heavy flow, and minimally utilized internals to maintain that. Your fluency in scheming was absurd, rhyming natural phrases together with few "function" words. Overall, this verse's structure was reversed. Whereas most verses rhyme to improve their punches, this verse punched to improve its rhymes. Subreal: Obvious key is obvious... I've seen much better material from you. Your conceptual similarity betrayed that, if not the simple rhyming and poor punches. You were wordy between your multies, lacked interesting setups, and brought played concepts. Overall, this verse was disappointing, but that's an inevitable flaw of open battles. Fair's in. High-Low. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 14:51:02

My winner has a better grasp of how multis work and structured his schemes pretty well. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 20:45:16

Nice battle here. One's prepared material vs a rushed set of bars to catch the open. Entertaining stuff on both sides. One was just all round smoother and cleaner than the other. Fairs in, i'm out. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-18 21:54:12

Lmao Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-19 11:47:38

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Posted on: 2015-11-19 13:28:56

Clear winner imo but it was a lot closer then expected. Pretty much agree with Shodan's & JFlo's breakdowns, overall it came down to who had a cleaner structure and fresher concepts to me. Thanks for the reads fellas, I'm glad this open wasn't wasted. Fair's In. Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-19 21:25:21

ok my winner had a nice flow . multis were good , tho there were a couple of forced and slanted ones . had a couple of dope punches which made me laugh . wasnt a fan of his closer tho lol - my loser i feel may be a lil rusty . again , had some forced /slanted multis . flow was ok and again had a couple of good lines , but had a bit of filler and some awkward wording at points . so quite a clear winner for me , but gb an fv . Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-19 22:06:54

It's all been said.. good read from both tho. Fv Voted: DaDDiO / Subreal
Posted on: 2015-11-20 05:07:48