gb winner showed some more creative punches here that hit stronger Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-06 00:43:44

gb. winners bars from the start won my vote off creativity and punch impact though my loser showed a bit more content and didnt lack in the creative field i feel my winners bars hit harder fv Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-06 11:52:27

the loser was definitely more amusing, the winner was on point and killed that last line. Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-06 14:04:05

Ok Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-07 01:44:35

My winner was up and down, and his wordplays were slightly awkward. However, his punches were high-quality and high-quantity, mixed with solid execution, rhyming, and flow. His multiple-punch bars internally connected well. My loser had decent concepts and poor concepts. Considering the short multis, weak punches, and such, he was clearly below my winner in all areas. Fair's in. Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-07 15:15:30

ok , dtd - multis were good tho could use more syllables , metas were ok but a lil basic and could have been worded better . the fan and rights lines were the best bars you had ,but needed harder punches , and also cut down on some filler - use the space to set up for the next punxh instead . indica ,loner multis which were nice and helped set up the punches . but for me it was your use of metas that stood out ,along with nice opener and closer . good battle overall but got my winner .fv n nh gents. Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-07 15:26:04

My winner had stronger punchlines to take this bout. Fv Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-07 17:07:12

Comb through my pubes just didnt saturate for me playa Voted: Dessaline /
Posted on: 2015-11-08 00:20:28