Pack Of Wolves Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-03 19:21:08

Jesus Christ. My winner, first of all, big ups on keeping consistent. You displayed the talent here I expected from you. Take that as you will, it was enough to score you what I voted you as, and be careful doing battles with these new kats Ill... One of these days one of 'em is gonna chew your face off real quick, ya feel? My loser; You came in hard at the start of your verse. Playing off of your opponent and working that same rhyme scheme for a funnier and/or harder-hitting open might actually be a staple to your style 'cause that opener was the strongest I've seen from you so far. The problem is that you switch your rhyming scheme too quickly. This results in either filler bars, which is more common in your case, or light jabs, which in a battle, you don't want; You want heavy punches the whole 9 yards. Keep grinding, fair's in, one love. Voted: Bnas / plonka
Posted on: 2015-11-06 06:50:10

yay, i like a constructively criticizing yet motivating vote and comment. Illa has been feuding with me a few times so it's nice to keep me on my toes as i hope i do him. JAY, what can i SAY, you make me feel GAY, and not the homo WAY. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-06 12:14:28

Like plonkA more on this one Voted: Bnas / plonka
Posted on: 2015-11-08 16:49:46

my winner had a nice flow .couple of good jabs thrown but nuffin too heavy , multis were good but had quite a bit of filler imo .my loser started off nice as well , but at some points after he just seemes to be rhyming words for the sake of it , ie , more filler . try and link everything into the punch - the multis , metaphors , wordplay etc should be integrated into landing the heaviest of blows which will help take your oppo down . experience took this , but not by much . fv n nh . Voted: Bnas / plonka
Posted on: 2015-11-08 21:58:52

Fv Damn it.. Voted: Bnas / plonka
Posted on: 2015-11-08 22:35:23