One had a couple decent ideas but the flow isn't consistent and the punches need to be set up better. The other had better structure and started off alright. Had some played stuff toward the end but overall had enough punches to take this. Posted on: 2015-10-21 21:44:17

Ex: 1. The Amish do not use electricity. 2. "DT" stands for "detox tremors" which refers to the violent shaking that alcoholics suffer during withdrawal. 3. "Gas/Emission". 4. Crossbows shoot 'bolts'. Frankenstein had two bolts in his neck, one on either side. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-10-21 00:37:12

This took a couple reads to go through and it came down to this. The vote can't get more thorough. My loser: You had bars, I won't lie. I see some mad potential. Your biggest strength clearly isn't your wordplay nor metaphors, but you have consistency in the strength of your punches. A few light jabs here and there with some heavy hitters evenly spread through-out your verse. That, in and of itself, is a great foundation for setting up your personal battling style. That said, your punches fell short to your opponent's for lack of any substantial "flair". You came with raw aggression, and that has its place, but in a match-up like this, it wasn't the best move to make. In order to strengthen your odds to out-do your opponent, chalk in a little more refined wordplay, more precision in the execution of your metaphors, and don't be afraid of laying down more complicated multis or having subsets of rhymes between them. My winner: You came correct with the precise chemistry needed to out-shine your opponent here. Your opening bar was sick as Hell. The only glaring issue I have with it is that the first line doesn't really transition well into the second, which there is nothing wrong with, but if you can open with a scheme and stick to it for 2 bars before a transition into the next idea, that would be sick. The next few lines had multis that out-did your opponent's selection of rhymes with more properly executed metaphors and had a sick closing bar that hammered a flurry of sub-rhymes between the respective multis to decorate your punch with a heavy-hitting bar. That's the haymaker that decided this battle for me. Both emcees have clearly contrasted from one another in their different stylings. Conveniently enough, they both had only 1 solid use of wordplay. Fittingly enough, my winner's use of that talent out-did my loser's. Though, unfortunately, both of them also lacked a sort of 'structure' I like to see in text battles around here. Keep grinding, the fair's in. Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-21 00:56:20

I liked one just A little more. Both good tho. Both send me 8 Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-21 05:41:22

for me , one was more complex and bought funnier and hard hitting bars . loser was ok but found it a bit simplistic at times and expected more . but gb n nh . Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-21 14:29:39

Dtdabeast: You had some nice concepts in your bars though you didn't connect with them, nor extend or execute them to their potential. If you work on that (connection and execution) you'll be a level above you're current. Sykotix: You're set ups to punches are nice an creative. You had one or two moments where they could have been executed better. Keep on the road you're on, you'll improve your skill set soon. Your opening was probably the best in this battle. Fairs in, i'm out. Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-21 22:47:53

Lets try an keep swaying comments off the battle. Let it ride out. Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-21 22:49:09

My winner came with More Punches and Proper Delivery keeping his Structure consistence. My loser had some Nice Concept but he seems to have Problem with Setups and Execution. Fv Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-22 01:29:56

nice bars from both excellent battle. one was just hit a lil harder for me fairs always Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-22 13:08:39

1st guy was beast 2nd guy was a different kind of animal.. fair's in. GB. Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-22 15:47:58

Both were sick! Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-22 23:39:11

Punch's my dude... good drop cross bow line needed work but if this was audio dt would take it. since it's text gb and great verse's from both, fv Voted: Dessaline / Sykotiqs
Posted on: 2015-10-23 14:59:35