Expo for ppl who needs it!! Jumping by the smokes simply is jumping outta harm smoke indicting hell fires etc. "turn around and get stuck" meaning she so big or fat rather that she turn around and get stuck (can't move) when you turn around you getting hit from the back just for yall virgins or niggas who ain't active wit the bishes!! Now the intricate wp. Pee in secs!! (Last line!! There are three different interpretations or uses. P=penis(pee) in secs(seconds or sex) so "p in secs" penis in sections basically taring that dick up!! If yall need further understandings don't vote. Thanks I keyed this was bored and had 5 minutes. Gluck dude. One. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-10-16 13:18:20

you'll be Staring down the "Gauge" like you running out of GAS. That was hard Voted: |3lood Lvst / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-10-16 13:47:28

OK one made since wit less structure and the other made no sense wit structure. So since this a text battle. It's all about structure. So Fv in u guys vote back Voted: |3lood Lvst / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-10-16 13:50:24

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Posted on: 2015-10-17 10:24:52

First off I wanna say to Quincy, dude mad props on that attempt for a biblical approach in one of your bars there. Shit had mad potential tbh. Dtdabeast, it's still about punches, sure; Structure has its place, but punches take the battle. This one in particular had an awesome quotable. "Staring down the gauge like you running you of gas" That had me grinning like an idiot. So onto the votes... My winner took this for the punches he threw at the start of his verse. The rest felt really filler-ish but he didn't need to flex to take the win. The last punch was -really- stretching it, so it was a light jab at best. My loser? You've got mad potential. Your structure was a little off, but aside from that, you really didn't throw anything in terms of a heavy-hitting bar directed at your opponent. You had a solid start that could have been built up into something incredible but it slid off and had me feeling blue-balled. The rest of your verse could have done as well in a cypher as it did in this battle. A couple parts in your verse made it feel like you were just going on with almost no point. That said, good battle here. Fair's in. Voted: |3lood Lvst / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-10-19 08:09:16