My winner had generally solid multis in here, although there was a type that affected one. Occasionally their wordplay slipped a little, but for the most part it was tight. Punches were solid. My loser needs to up their all round game I'm afraid. Verse was a lot more basic, and didn't really do anything to make it stand out (punches, multis, wordplay, etc). Voted: Kold Krhymez / Official_C2
Posted on: 2015-08-28 16:51:06

My Winner Definitely Did Everything necessary to take this win. Nice punches and set ups. Nice multies. Round of applause. My loser was a tad too simplistic and lacked hard punches. Fairs are in!! Voted: Kold Krhymez / Official_C2
Posted on: 2015-08-28 17:56:31

Too much technicality can be bad. Balance is good I'll leave you with that. and good battle m8 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-28 19:49:09

Also Ice I did use wordplay, multis (count the syllables just cuz I didn't rhyme in every word of about every sentence doesn't = basic), similes, and metaphors. Overall thanks for the feedback though. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-28 19:51:14

One took this with better multis and punches he even had one line that made me chuckle. As for the loser u came rather simple with the rhymes to be honest and the lines felt like u threw them together just because...Anyway fv in. Voted: Kold Krhymez / Official_C2
Posted on: 2015-08-29 12:23:25

Just to clarify C I wasn't saying that you didn't have any of those, I just thought your use of them was a little bit basic. Your verse didn't (for me) have a particular style to make it stand out, such as having massive punches, extended multis or notably clever wordplay. No hate man, just writing down what my thoughts were! Voted: Kold Krhymez / Official_C2
Posted on: 2015-08-29 13:04:39

Fv hb Voted: Kold Krhymez / Official_C2
Posted on: 2015-08-30 09:21:29