I gon kill you boy. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-24 05:38:18

Yo WifeBeater! Try not to hit enter in your verses as it limits what you can type, also capitalise your rhymes! That aside: I liked that one verse had a consistent theme, and thought that a lot of what it brought was interesting. I do think, however, that it didn't quite execute it perfectly - some of the multis felt very forced, and a couple of times you didn't really seem to build up to a punch. Some polish and that shit would be dope though! The other verse didn't really have any telling punches and came with some basic rhyming. They could do with reading around some other verses on here to see what people are generally doing. Keep elevating! Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-24 06:04:01

I Agree with ice-9 on this.. Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-24 06:42:30

Quick Expo.. If You Read My Multiz Slow You Will See They Ryme Up!!! Also If You Don't Know Texas Chainsaw Massacre...Michael Myers...Dexter & Jason Voorhees Are All Movie Or T V Show Killers!!! Anything Else You Don't Get PM Me For A Further Expo!!! & Thiz Was My Original Verse But I Had To Cut It Down...... I'm Turnin thiz BATTLE into an "AMERICAN HORROR STORY" Juzt Like slaughtering CATTLE but I'm "A TEAR IN HIM MORE GOREY"~ then tha ◆TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE◆ or some ^Michael-Myers^ type A SHIT when I SPIT ◆HEXES AIMed RAW PASSed AT YER◆ CLICK of ^Spiteful-Liars^~ like (Dexter) wit my "DARK PASSENGER" your gonna ◆DIE TONIGHT◆ when I "SPARK BRASS IN YA" bitch don't even ◆TRY TO FIGHT◆~ your going on my Blood "SLIDE COLLECTION" Right after I RAPE You wit HATE on thiz DATE wit my EIGHT & you can't "HIDE INFECTION" on your played "RYME SELECTION" cuz my linez cause A fukin "MIND DISSECTION" so call it FATE or some "BLIND DIRECTION"~ when ya `eyes go pop` like A Jason-◆VOORHEES SESSION◆ & in thiz rap game still thiz ◆WHORE NEEDS LESSONS◆ Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-24 07:09:11

fair is in Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-24 09:46:20

search and employ Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-26 04:27:13

raw.... Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-26 15:28:14

Wifebeater ironically got beaten round the ring easy win here, remember to use all the space in the box instead of cappin one liners that are pretty basic good drop tho, my winner s verse speaks for itself votes in Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-26 17:35:36

Jaws did 9/11 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-27 01:21:44

Gb Voted: 《11:11》 / WifeBeater
Posted on: 2015-08-27 03:13:19