Quick Expo...Foldiers is Coffee and it can be put on auto drip...flowing with auto clips...A TRANNY Is A Transvestite Which Is A Man & Woman Both Or One Who Switched From A Man To A Woman Or Visa Versa!!! Please Be Educated On Metaphores/Multis ect. Before Casting a VOTE!!! My multis were dead on..also if you don't get any of my content just ask me...it's pretty simple stuff to anyone who knows the basics of text battling...Please keep it Fair as i'm new here!!! GL To whoever takes this #Realness Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-17 04:29:04

Both Very Good Dropz!!! But My Winner Had More Set Upz To Hiz Punchez...Such Az Meta's & Unforced On Point Wit Syllable Multiz!! And Some Funny Linez Az Well!!! My Loser Had Some Good Disses...Decent Set Ups...But Tha Multiz Were Forced On Some Barz....And A Couple Repeat Rymez!!! Either Way If Ya Need A Deeper Expo...Hit Me Up!! But I'm Very Impressed On Both Dropz Esp Since Y'all Juzt Put Yur First Battlez In!!! Anyhow No H8 Or Sway!!! Fair Vote Iz In!!! #KeepGrindin Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 06:01:50

My winner came with some cool extended, varied scheming. What held back his verse for me was that he wasn't using that to work towards a punch, but was combining words together in order to keep the rhyme scheme going (occasionally at the expense of making sense!). That said there was a nice construction and flow to his verse. My loser was guilty of doing similar things (i.e. an emphasis on scheming over punching) but was a little sloppier in their execution. With some tweaking both could be doing some sick shit though! Keep elevating! Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 07:29:14

ok Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 12:21:23

One artists Concepts were over the top. Exciting. Could have used better structure tho. Loser was a bit all over the place. Time put in and experience drove me to my decision. Fairs in boys!! Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 14:09:10

Alright battle. Both need to focus on clarity and concepts more. EG: "Midget with no shoulders." What does that even imply? Does he not have arms either then? And how is that relevant? Also: don't spend a whole comment educating us on why your verse is good. It should speak for itself. For the other, work on multis a bit. PSYCHOSIS and VOICES don't rhyme at all (the vowel sounds are different), and if you have to say things like "DISSED-TURD-KINGS" to keep the homophones going, it's best to let it go. Go for substance over style. I voted for the one who came slightly more polished, both have potential. learn as you go, keep going. Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 15:18:52

Decent read here I felt my winner just edged this with a few better punches fv nohate~ Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-17 18:16:55

@Homeskool (Expo) - Midget with no shoulders has A double metaphore meaning!! First referring to the SEX SOCK part A midget with no shoulders implies my opponent is retired from rapping & now being used as A fuck toy for a small Dick that's been smashed/dismembered ect. With the added smashed with A BOULDER Part Also A midget with no shoulders can mean exactly that A midget who's missing his shoulders and fucking him as a jack off sock adding A slight comedy twist!! And it worked into my rhyme and multis..to the set up!! No sway anybody just replying with A further expo to the cat who's 9-10 on his record LOL #AllRespect and please if you need an expo on any of my bars like I said from the jump hmu for one!!! #100 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-17 22:36:38

Man this shit is dope as fucc!!! One I feel just murdered it tho with set ups/comedy/and well structured multis!! FV is in Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-18 02:45:34

The smoother read is what got it for me the scheme was executed well but still could have been done better my advice use more references to increase the chance punches will hit Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 03:41:24

Liked both, one was better "formatted" but that is hard to vote on since you have to try to think how it would sound "spoken" or "rapped"...Throwin' evens, but my winner one from some harder punches, thats the only reason...The last bar from my winner is what got it in my opinion. Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 04:53:11

The midget line had me cracking up... one just brought more game on this.. my votes in! Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 07:08:22

Great battle! Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 09:05:37

RapAmphetamine: If the first meaning is meaningless, the double-meaning is worthless. Also: A midget who's been "SMASHED WITH A BOULDER" would be dead, regardless of where his shoulders were, and would thus be incapable of performing any sexual actions. Do you not see how ridiculous this whole scenario sounds? Gonna make fun of my record? That's because I only take high-quality opponents. If you want to prove you're one of them, send me 8. prove yourself. Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 15:22:55

Punk ass @ Homeskool get off my battle bitch nigga wit that sway shit^^^^^ u send 8 mr. Vet!!! I dropped this open send away or STFU ain't my fault yo ass is too dumb to get the comedy image in your head #Owned Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-19 17:35:33

fv Voted: RapAmphetamine / Ersine
Posted on: 2015-08-19 21:21:07