(not prewritten and wasnt for anyone else just did this just now) Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-04 21:30:48

my winner won with punches and clarity... i lerned the hard way to but you need to break up your bars and punctuate your punches... close battle and like them both so FV Voted: KreativeMind / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-08-04 22:55:19

"u couldnt buy this battle if u was rich. Imma kill u u couldnt buy back ur existence if i billed u" tbh when i rapped that I thought that was clever as shit XD Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-08-04 23:35:14

Complexity won the day for me here. My loser had some nice material but could have done with a little more creativity with their concepts. Voted: KreativeMind / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-08-05 06:15:20

Honestly Kreative I think your biggest setback is your whole "freestyle" mentality. Your bars can only be so good if you don't put actual time into creatively constructing them. I think everytime ive seen you spar thats the reason ive voted against u, but uve got a clear grasp on creative writing n obviously can structure schemes so if you did start putting more time into writing ud be a LOT better. also try capitalizing your multis, or each rhyming word in your verse like u see everyone else doing. its the standard aruond here n everyone does it, makes ur verse easier to read which means more ppl will read it entirely instead of just reading 60% then voting like 90% of letsbeef does. on 2 the battle i think both of u were alright kind of shoddy in places, my winners punches didn't connect with any impact as much as they just let the setups n creative allusions work. means it wasnt as impactful but was still creative. imma give dis to Q based on complexity as ice said. gb no hate Q we should get a spar in my man! Voted: KreativeMind / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-08-05 07:03:31

loser had some nice ideas but executed badly , everything needs a lot more complexity , winner took this in all areas imo . nh n fv Voted: KreativeMind / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-08-05 18:22:50

This is more of a cypher vs hard punches battle my winner just had everything right, my loser needs ta step up his game fair is in.. Voted: KreativeMind / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-08-07 07:56:37