Yo Zippo! Some pointers for you whilst you're on here! First off don't hit enter in your verses! The key is to 'fill the box' with as much content as you can. Next you're going to want to follow the general formatting of this site (puts your rhymes in CAPS). You should also think about what you can say that will give your bars a telling punch, not much of what you said is really going to affect an opponent! Finally, try making your rhyming a little more complex with the inclusion of internal rhymes/multis/etc. There's some really good guides in the forum section so you should consider checking out those! Welcome aboard! Voted: zippo / Proctologist
Posted on: 2015-07-30 21:40:19

Sniped..to my loser just fill your box fully cap your rhymes..work on complexity and practice more..My Winner was more polished but its not like he completely decimated the competition..both could use work gb no h8 if theres h8 send 8 peace.. Voted: zippo / Proctologist
Posted on: 2015-07-31 04:23:08

Zip Betta Fill That Box with Bars to Even have a chance. Common Rookie syndrome. Don't worry. We all had that issue. Proc, u need to count those syllables for a smoother read and bring harder punches. But nice Snipe. Shake that rust off! Voted: zippo / Proctologist
Posted on: 2015-07-31 06:27:51

I think that Procto got this...I don't need to say anything... "ice-9" said it all...AGENTS IN THE FUCKIN' HOUSE. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-31 09:05:10

fv Voted: zippo / Proctologist
Posted on: 2015-08-02 04:39:08