Expo sun maid is a brand of raisins Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-28 22:05:43

Open battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-28 22:06:03

gb man. *closed battle* now Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-28 22:16:35

Expo: Used his "sun" line with the "Last look at the SUN/ Blind" line - And "Parents to Sign a Waiver" line, saying he is underage (doubt it's true) just a blow below the belt (that came out gay...ha) Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-28 22:17:45

My Winner Took This Shit Wit HELLA PUNCHES and schemes.!! Impressed! Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-28 22:41:37

good battle. punches got it for me, noh8 fair vote Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-28 23:14:57

Fairly solid landslide on my winners behalf, though he did have his own set of discrepancies I'll go through. I think my loser really suffers from his general lack of multi crafting experience, and the basic state of his rhyme-ability makes for a pretty hard read of his bars. On top of that, your concepts are quite unevolved. If you'd like assistance in these areas, feel free to visit the forums or PM me for any mentoring and I'd love to help out. To get to my winner, I think its obvious you do have general experience in the world fo battling, but some of your concepts are a bit forced to make the punch work, which makes for a rookie-esque implication when observed. Your rhyming is quite good, and you don't seem to have any notable flaws in your multi-ability but the main problem with your style is the lack of creative haymakers to top your bars off and compliment your more polished multi use. to sum it up, though, my winner got this in most fields of battling. More complex rhyming, concepts, better fluidity, easier bar transition, etc, etc. No hate intended, either of you may feel free to hit me up for any feedback or general elevating as I love to assist emcees in that arena! Peace! Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-29 01:30:59

I'm a musician not a rapper, I come here to elevate in music writing, and FOR SURE will take you up on your kind offer. I really appriciate the feedback! Thanks again. - THIS IS A LOSS IN THE BAG (I have done wayyyy better) I went to number 19 in less than a week when I started, guess it's time to drop back down, LOL...I'll get there! I will NEVER be a rapper, not my style, but I am learning more about using multi's in my style of writing. Thanks again for your time man @Babylon Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-29 02:09:40

gb Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-29 16:20:01

Too many punches thrown from one...FV Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-30 04:45:59

Fairs in. Kinda one sided, no hate. Gringao you used a french word in there? (inattaquable) Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-30 12:12:06

A French word, yes, but it is also English. We use a lot of French words in English. (French is actually considered the United States second language) even though Spanish is spoken more...(look at your passport before 1999 if you have one that old) It was only English and French. Now it is English/French/Spani sh. =D Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-30 12:16:26

One did his thing, other needs to work on setups to his punches so they land harder and upgrade syllable count in multis a bit for more impact. Ideas are there just needs better execution. FV in no hate GB Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-30 19:25:27

My winner killed it word for word simple really. True has good wordplay n flow but this wasn't ya best Voted: Celsius / MC Gringão
Posted on: 2015-07-30 20:48:10

Ohhh shit, I just made the TOP TEN. Hah, cool...Might not last long, but I'm goin' for number one of the month, then G.O.A.T @ LETSBEEF (lol...) Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-30 21:56:05