Expo: safety tank is where all shit's gets collected in nepal idk abt there so a lil expo Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-27 14:02:16

Fairs in Voted: ADIDASTAT / Drgaire
Posted on: 2015-07-27 14:07:56

My winner had the better rhymes. Neither verse was really packing a punch though. Both attempted wordplay, but I'm not sure it really added to the verse for either. Keep elevating guys! Voted: ADIDASTAT / Drgaire
Posted on: 2015-07-27 15:38:25

alright, sit down homie its time for a LESSON/ with all that talk you must NEED SOME ATTENTION/...Come On Now. That Dosent Even Rhyme Or make Sense. If u Want to Win Battles THAT HAS TO STOP! you can inbox me and i'll help you with your structure. you need to count the syllables so that ur verse flows smoothly. its very important. ........... And the Other MC/// so step back n STOP FRONTIN u'll not create dope bars even if u wrote with COCAIN...i'm requesting u dont act like dude sit BACK PLEASE cuz rap is 'mind race' n aint winning it anyway like FAT KIDS// bro, None of that Rhymed! its like yall are not even trying yall just writing anything that comes to mind. if u dont take this serious then you will never excel and get better. yall gotta fix these errors ASAP! both MC's can inbox me for help. Good Try Tho. 'A' for Effort but a 'F' for execution. Voted: ADIDASTAT / Drgaire
Posted on: 2015-07-27 16:49:56