cut off one of my lines at the end!! *ahead and 'blow them blokes', how you 'supporting votes'* Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-15 00:11:52

maybe not on your level yet SOAK but i figured id give it a try. give me some feedback bro, noh8 good battle stay up 1 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-15 00:12:49

honestly i like the beginning of my loser's drop you fell off somewhere towards the end imo to my winner good stuff as always fv in Voted: HIGHpothasis / georgep3
Posted on: 2015-07-15 00:26:48

I felt one had forced wordplay in few areas, the multies were gud, had tiny wording problems, I think his closer was a tad beter than most of his lines, the other had so much stretched out bars, I cudnt tell wher the bars or punch was gon make the cut, shud have kept it short not ta delve the readers into confusion, I got my winner the fair is in.. Voted: HIGHpothasis / georgep3
Posted on: 2015-07-15 04:40:25

My loser was just a bit too stretched out and my winner was just hitting harder and with tighter lines. Voted: HIGHpothasis / georgep3
Posted on: 2015-07-15 09:59:14

my loser came strong towards the end but in the beginning had stretched multis..winner was ok...try not to use he same word twice..like arm and arm...IMO close.. Voted: HIGHpothasis / georgep3
Posted on: 2015-07-16 04:18:17

SOAKS A BITCH...But I still have to vote fair....When are you going to respond to 8 you fucking faggot??? You see I don't hate vote like you, punk. I vote fuckin' fair how it should be.... Voted: HIGHpothasis / georgep3
Posted on: 2015-07-17 15:29:18