Both of you need a lot of work ta do, I know somehow you took the Audio approach but it felt short, try filling the box by writing a verse on paper n then copy n paste it, it wud seem easier ta follow your verses straight up, n then try ta pick up concepts ta hit your opponent with, writing like that doesn't work in this site n It only takes away from your verse. Clean up your multies and make sure the words you're rhyming are congruent with one another with how they sound and the syllable count. That ensures you won't have broken multies. Fair vote is explained peace!! Voted: Ignacious / oceaN
Posted on: 2015-07-13 13:49:40

Didn't really see a battle here guys....... Voted: Ignacious / oceaN
Posted on: 2015-07-17 15:34:04

sounded more like poetry to me and not even a course to a track Voted: Ignacious / oceaN
Posted on: 2015-07-21 07:02:21