My loser came hard too but my winner had me laughing so I ended up going that way. With that being said, to my winner, you should try to structure it a little better in the future for readability i.e. capping out parts of your lines that hit together how your opponent did. I just had to go with the punchlines on this one. Voted: K-Melo / Mizz Ammo
Posted on: 2015-07-02 00:14:27

Really close guys. Had to read it a few times. I think one edged it a bit, good shit from both sides. Fv. Voted: K-Melo / Mizz Ammo
Posted on: 2015-07-02 08:36:01

not bad good battle wheres round to at mizz house lol; Voted: K-Melo / Mizz Ammo
Posted on: 2015-07-02 12:36:49

Am for that dog :) Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-07-02 17:39:05

Ok, this battle is really tough to call and as im writing this i still havent settled on a winner. here are my observations. Fisto, you have the idea of setups and punches and you are trying to execute them. Right now they seem sloppy though. Your punches arent landing well because your wording isn't as precise as it needs to be. The beginning of your verse seems to be setting up something that peters off and the rhyme switch threw me a bit. You have BOAT FOR THE WAVE then SHOWIN HIS GAME then a string of rambo-ammo-cammo and im expecting to finish with NOWIN HIS NAME or FLOW IS INSANE but you introduce a brand new multi that just seems off there. Its like listening to the beginning of a familliar song but not getting to hear the end of it and it bugs you. You had some punches in here that were ok but I think they were lost in the static of wording that just wasn't on point. ...Mizz, you have more of a long string of rhyming disses that dont really have much punch power because they arent set up. You have some funny stuff here but a lot of it is pretty simple and played, your dad molested you, piss and nazis and stuff thats pretty par for the course. I think you have potential and just need to be shown some ropes, you could turn out to be a problem. Basically you need some set ups that connect and build to that final punch to give it power. Come up with some concepts that havent been done a million times, make some shit unique. You could be good here. Keep grinding guys. Think I got my winner here by a small margin. Voted: K-Melo / Mizz Ammo
Posted on: 2015-07-03 21:23:58

GB but one slightly edged out i think the reason for me is variety but it was close for real. Voted: K-Melo / Mizz Ammo
Posted on: 2015-07-08 02:10:22