Cemetery* ....arg effin typos.. yup yup Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-06-24 14:24:07

FV Voted: Bartacus /
Posted on: 2015-06-24 16:28:50

One line kind of flipped the others whole verse. Stick to punches, I felt like I was reading more of a cypher @Eyed. But fair vote. Voted: Bartacus /
Posted on: 2015-06-24 19:31:43

appreciate the fair votes bros Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-06-24 21:45:56

Nice spar here, Eyedea it seems like you sacrificed almost any and all multi / flow prowess for an attempted scheme that frankly took far too long to execute for it to be a hit. When setting up punchlines and using movie title setups, less is more. If instead of cramming in all relevant movie titles, you step back & use wordplay to sell just a few of those relevant movie titles you can easily turn a bad bar into a great bar. I feel as if you should try to up your multi game and use more of whats easiest to learn, and then once you get a nice grasp on that move on to things like Punchlines. If you need help with any of this feel free to PM me. Now Asool.. You had more of a battlers verse, to me. You executed personal disses towards your opponent while upholding a consistent fluidity. I do believe that you fell short with some of your multis being broken, but you did show more of a knowledge on multis than your opponent and used that advantage to pull off a better verse, imo. No hate intended, feel free to hit me up if any of you want feedback! Voted: Bartacus /
Posted on: 2015-06-25 15:15:10