da fuq? haha...deadline on this was like 2 weeks ago. good shit though partna Posted on: 2015-06-30 00:14:54

Great battle. I felt one took the personal rout at a disservice to his own punches, under-representing his abilities. My winner had a bit more cleaner of a scheme and relevant wordplay and setups to make his punches more impactful. This is close, and I imagine could go either way. I would like to see a rematch tbh. Props and respect 2 both as always. FV in. (Also, *cough* FVC members should vote on the links in their threads bbbbbefore they close... no hate, lmao.) Voted: Esso /
Posted on: 2015-06-29 15:22:52

well very nice from both sides here. esso: you had some great ideas and smooth shit packed w/your box. 1 thing caught me though. that chastiy belt scheme was a lil played but you gave me the feel to the punch that was desired. but then on it declined from the lower portion to meh. lockhart. you had a funny opener. not super fresh on the idea but made it work nicely. the wording was iffy on it but the setup could use a tweak or two. my biggest issue w/your verse was the creativity and density im used too seeing from you. i am a bigtime lockhart reader. i like yo bars alot. you just needed more creative scehmes and a few more jabs which wouldve made me say ok. this was hot. but dont get it wrong. you did speak flame. but the count on the punches fell one short of the w. 3 punches ta 2. gb guys. ps. lock. yur closer was funniest line i read 2day bro. good read fellas. very close but can go either way. swindles this way tho. return um. Voted: Esso /
Posted on: 2015-06-29 20:24:33

Esso: Opener was solid, and felt the personals hit nicely because i actually been around to know what you were talking about. Lockhart: Opener was also solid, Carpet line was nice with a mix of personal in there, Closer had me laughing although i feel last line could have been worded a bit better. This one is really close, but in the end i felt one's personals held a little more weight and that edged it for me. GB and GL...FV is in Voted: Esso /
Posted on: 2015-06-30 00:28:10

Opener: Tie I got this for a tie cus both started gud, same levelness here Punches: I felt one was creative with punches n was more complex, n had one stand up punch ta me plus the wordplay that was executed well, n the other didn't realy go hard, I think he was light n dabbed played out schemes.. Persona ls: its one-sided here, was expecting the same agressive personal gorging but the other felt short, so I go with the one I think did justice ta dissing harder here.. Flow: Tie, both had no problem here.. Creativity : Esso, I think he thought out the box here, I think lockhart wen realy light here, wich is a let down ta me n he knows it.. Entertainmen t: I enjoyed Esso's verse most, but not ta take anything away from Lockhart, I know he can do beter than this The fair is in.. Voted: Esso /
Posted on: 2015-06-30 13:03:52