MURDA Posted on: 2015-06-04 18:48:58

Expo: Fuck your bars Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-06-03 22:22:45

**BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN** Row : HARRY FROM HOME AONE | Shovels in his face was very clever, and this was a great, simple, and sweet punchline to grab my attention. Row : MOSES IN THE WILDERNESS | The set up?? Write Ex A Diss/Exodus was pretty sick famo lol and the fact the finishing blow (as a multie) was creative as well only added extra flavor to an already well decorated dish. Usually someone has a great set up with subpar punchline, or vice versa. But both shined greatly in that bar. Row : FUCKA WAS COGSWORTH | Good idea, and a very good attempt at making it work. I know difficult it is to rhyme words like WORTH, but you pulled it off. Seeing as how, by default, it's not a word that rhymes with many things it shined in comparison to other people's attempts. Row : PRAYIN FOR YA LIFE | This wasn't bad, but I expected just a little bit more destruction from a finisher from you. Like I said, it wasn't bad, but it's hard reading a verse that well-executed and then end on a B-note, ya know? Ex : LADY IS ABSTINENT | Not a bad opener. I've seen this concept before, but you made it fresh, so props to you on that. Ex : PARKINSON'S DISORDER | This was a great idea, with the setup in mind. However, this multie was extremely stretched out. Not to say it didn't work but your average joe might not accept that as a smooth delivery. As for me personally, I liked it. I just struggle with the through that you could have delivered that concept in a shorter capacity without sacrificing its intensity. Ex : CLOSER TO DEATH/SHOW SOME RESPECT | Up until the end it was a subpar sequence. Too much guntalk with not enough "side action" in between. Usually when the set up takes more than one line, someone will throw a small jab in between to just raise the eyebrow ya know? But there I just read a good amount of gunplay without the substance of a real punch. Once it got to the end though it delivered well and smooth. All that just to say the setup could have been a little more creative, especially when you're battling someone who's made his name off of creativity. **VERDICT** Tbh, I know about this battle way before it even took place, and warned one he'd have to have some concepts out the ass lol I feel one outclassed the other in that aspect, as well as the delivery of them. Fair is in and explained. Definitely a hotlist topper. Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-04 00:10:34

Damn gb guys Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-04 01:17:21

nice from both Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-04 08:59:24

Winner was more call consistent with it. Fv. Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-04 15:14:41

side picked Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-05 03:12:24

Fv Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-05 23:54:54

fv both came strong Voted: exZACHly /
Posted on: 2015-06-06 04:12:37