expo: Jack Kevorkian was a doctor who fought to legalize euthanasia/doctor-as sisted suicide, object impermanence refers to the fact that objects exist even when not observed (Or do they?... Rant to comments), David Icke is a conspiracy theorist lecturer who espouses the view point that a master race of underground reptilians secretly control the world. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-28 23:14:00

forgot to mention it, but Kevorkian was sent to prison because of that. which is the point of the bar. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-28 23:15:11

yo Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-29 07:51:51

One won it for attempting more complex rhyme schemes while I feel like the other one lost it for some broken rhymes. I feel like the porsche line didnt fit in that part at all. Also near the beginning I feel like that one line you had should have read 'weaker with schemes', i feel like that would have been a better placement but overall decent concepts coming from both Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-29 10:41:20

God Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 00:37:20

fv Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 01:10:55

Voting upon request. Ahura, good wordplay and nice vocabulary throughout. However, your ideas weren't executed the best of their ability fam. They were great, fresh concepts. Anyone with a brain stem can see that your schemes are greatly improving. However, you need to be able to bring those ideas forth in both a clean and direct way. Otherwise it'll either go over the voters heads or you'll just come off choppy and/or not making sense. Just be a liiiiiittle bit smoother and a little more clean and you'd be golden. Rept, tbh I think you focused way too much on rhyming, and not enough on actually setting up, and delivering punchlines. You had some nice ideas and short spouts of metaphors like the Mirror This line, but that needs to be a consistent display througout your whole verse chief. A lot of rhyming, but not as much substance. Just my honest opinion. Vote is in. Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 01:53:40

Upon request? Huh? Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-30 02:35:51

My winner had a couple of heavy stings to take the win Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 04:24:30

That was actually really close. One line from my winner took it though. Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 21:05:29

seen alot better from both.. one was a bit cleaner in execution althought punches fell short for much of the verse.. other, was very sloppy in wording,a few of the concepts to its punch didnt make sense to me which really hindered his verse... went wit the overall better written verse.. fairs in Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-30 21:52:45

close match/ going with the stronger punches, both def showed up tho/ Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-31 00:34:33

GB My winner didn't have to explain it! Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-05-31 19:37:58

I thought one was overall smoother here and the bars were more thought out. One seemed to be all over the place and some of the concepts to flips just weren't hitting. Ones execution is what took this battle. Fairs dropped Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-06-01 00:45:57

right Voted: Shodan / OGTookMySoul
Posted on: 2015-06-01 01:05:20

On what planet does this type of shit happen...this guys last bar was the only thing that rhymed...and his verse made absolutely no sense...i want the renaissance days back, when voters actually read. Lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-06-01 05:11:46