Not the best Ive seen from one but easily more creative. one needs to take their time and form coherent lines. Posted on: 2015-05-28 21:16:26

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Posted on: 2015-05-26 13:31:21

Lizman merked it definitely would want to battle one day Voted: Drgaire / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-05-26 16:33:23

Gotta be honest with this assessment. Dr, a common problem I'm seeing in your drop is that you're capping irrelevant words. That will always hurt you more than harm you. As far as your ideas and schemes, they are greatly improving. They're actually punchlines lol so it's good to see you elevating. Lizman, dude....I see your approach in your lines and your ideas come off cool, but here it wasn't enough to match in my opinion. You're usually spot on with your delivery but here it seemed like you threw rhymes together. Like, some bars weren't even bars. It was just rhymes in-between commas. C'mon dude. You're better than that. Voted: Drgaire / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-05-27 01:43:15

Both could have done a lot better in my opinion, multis are good, too many exhaust the delivery and overall setup of a punch, and wrongfully captioned rhymes will do the opposite just as da te, said, but I guess better idea and concept takes it, just by a hair tho. Voted: Drgaire / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-05-28 20:01:21

Better flow from one, Liz you should cap your end rhymes. Voted: Drgaire / Lizman
Posted on: 2015-05-28 23:09:30