Winner barely got this but had busted multis. It was a tougher read until the end where ya executed better. The last two lines were the difference here. Loser's flow was better but i co-sign what somebody said about use of quotes. it's every couple words and it ain't all relevant to the punch. One more good jab woulda swung this the other way. Posted on: 2015-05-09 08:18:33

Bitchin bout a vote again? 'choppy ass bar's' got nothin to do with 'rocky @ large', 'overrated faggot' got nothin to do with 'older dated fabric'. They multis but they aint relevant to one another regardless how long your expo is. I need credits and give honest feedback. Take that how you want to. Use it to elevate or close your mind and keep losing 8 bar battles to the garbage snipers. do you little homie...Ill leave your battles alone from now on. Posted on: 2015-05-09 16:49:52

QUIK expo.Even w/ya 'CHOPPY ASS BAR'S!' That's 'SLOPPY @ SPAR'S?!' We'll never see mind fuck @the top of his game when he 'square up in the ring' like 'ROCKY @LARGE!!' When Rocky Battled Some He wasn't Beating Everyone.. See ya 'BAR'S IS LAME!' You style played out ya 'OVERRATED FAGGOT!' Your 'GARBAGE MAYNE!' Like 'OLDER DATED FABRIC'S!!' Simple Jab There.. you never seen to be 'TOPPING THE LATEST NEWS!!' Cuz 'this fight gonna be deemed wild' like 'ROCKY IN PAPER VIEWS!!' Basically saying his battles he's had be fire(mainly cuz he's overrates a lil bit) d when I dig on it'll be come a crazy event like Rocky in ppv. Ya style faker! Ya 'DEATHS COMING SOONER!' Then them 'VET'S RUNNING THRU YA!' Have em 'Seeing These Hands' when I'm 'Beating Weak Man' And have Mind 'Wringing/Ringing @The Entry' like a 'Senior's Beat In!' *Knock Knock* basically the relation to the bar was the idea of older seniors that are on getting beat up. When they get beat up some just go to the senior center or ring @the hospital and stuff. But gluck MF. Only Good Voter's. Definitely Hotlisted. #Leggo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-07 17:36:59

ONE CAUGHT MY ATENTION MORE! FV IN Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-07 18:18:37

Nice spar Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-08 00:49:31

Ok This battle was interesting,My Winner Came with decent wordplay n punches tied ta personals,the set ups weren't boring just nice jabs tat treaded onto punches the only fear I have on my winner's bars is they might be slept on,onto my looser's box:I felt fits lines were realy strecthed,n set ups were a lil lacklustre,had few hiting punches not bodybag punches but decent punches,was complex but had lines not executed well the multies barely matched:overal,My winner had a Consistent verse while my looser hitted less hard dope battle thou the fair is in.. Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-08 04:47:06

I hope it's not just me, but Mind, I couldn't follow your verse at all chief. Every other word was capped and there was no clear structure. Your intensity in the verse was A1, very good, but other than that it seemed choppy and had no clear direction. I'm not sure if it's rust or what, but If I were you I would clean it up a little bit fam. Quincy, you're improving with each battle. I can see you constructing lines now instead of just repetitive rhyming. It helps the overall strength of your verse when we can see you actually setting up lines to deliver them smoothly. Your Rocky references also gave you a little bit of an edge. My vote is explained fellas. And hopefully respected. If not, send 8. Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-08 12:00:29

In the same boat as Sky.. i had to go back and try to find what rhymed with what. Punches were decent tho. Quincy u also need to clean up, it seemed every other word had quotes around it and it wasn't a setup. verse flowed better however. Slightly more impacting punches got this. Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-08 15:43:09

Hoe-Kay??? Quotes ain't never related to the punch?? Y'all must be on planet shmacking 101 or y'all are just plain elitorate.(No offense esso and Far Out) please tell me where there are no relationship with the quote's?? I must say I do quote my rhyming words when I have put quotes around them to emphasize the Starr Lt and finish of the bar. Fyi. Last phase of verse?? That threw y'all off. Other than that I only put quotes up if there is a relationship between the quoted text and the bar's punch?? (Hello) ex.. (Again) 'ThisKidsGonzo??' Even w/ya 'CHOPPY ASS BAR'S!' That's 'SLOPPY @ SPAR'S?!' We'll never see mind fuck @the top of his game when he 'square up in the ring' like 'ROCKY @LARGE!!' This quoted part'square up in the ring??? Is definitely related.. Square up=fight @the ring??=in a big crowd space?? Hello... Okay another shmacking your dumbness. you never seen to be 'TOPPING THE LATEST NEWS!!' Cuz 'this fight gone be deemed wild' like 'ROCKY IN PAPER VIEWS!!' This here was a lyte metaphorical jab referring to boxing of course..'this fight gonna be deemed wild' was only quoted and I repeat'only quoted' cuz it's emphasizing the metaphor's play in the punch. Also giving you dumbass nonsensical voter's an idea as opposed to letting your squint and say what the hell are you talking bout?? So my question is why does lb love making it seem as if your doing everything wrong and when you fix it... It's still wrong.. I'm tired of bs swindles y'all stay grabbing beefs not swaying but DAMN.. If I did do that 'Quote shit' in my verse this comment would not come out of my mouth. I give real feedback chick's. If y'all can't give a decent explanation of why you felt like sleeping on a niggas court?? Then send 8.. No funny I just don't like wack ass feedback that has nothing to do w/nothing. Just send 8 if you must (only if y'all down as I'm always keyed up) &lemme 'KaReem Abdul Ya-Bars!' Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-09 09:31:57

Cool story ock, send the round 2 if you ain't feeling it. Bitching/swaying ish unnecessary Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-05-09 12:01:19

Actually pretty decent battle.. pretty close i think one had sum iffy lines that either i jus didnt understand or made little to no sense to me ..but the concepts matched on both parts..i think one jus had a overall stronger punch flow better matched ..in all fairness i voted for who i liked more one jus stood out better ..g'luck both Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-10 11:07:12

QUINCY IS NICE Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-10 15:03:29

Winner's flow was smoother, structure was better and much clearer than mind Voted: Mind Fuck / Quincy®
Posted on: 2015-05-10 15:23:21