This was pretty close in some aspects. However, I thought ones bar was a bit more creative here. The other was a tad played in terms of the concept. The wording was also off one of bar here. Fairs dropped. I have a winner Voted: S O U L R I T E / Ret
Posted on: 2015-04-30 13:39:31

Ret- due to how short your bar was, i expect you to establish and maintain relevancy throughout the bar. i didn't know you were going to end with a paris hilton punch until you got to it, it needed a better build. cut the filler. Paris similar problem. i'd have preferred if u stuck to the hockey concept rather than switching to some wack ass camera line (just being straight up) one got this off of slightly more impact of the bar in its entirety. fair Voted: S O U L R I T E / Ret
Posted on: 2015-04-30 21:41:45

i feel this was close but the deciding factor was the simple execution of the punch though it was smooth.. one took too long to deliver hurting their bar and didn't end up connecting both ways but still a decent bar.. going this way tho. fairs in...(now that i got exclusive)... one send it back both y'all.. Voted: S O U L R I T E / Ret
Posted on: 2015-05-19 13:14:41