Winner got me their schemes better although not the best i've seen from him, punchlines weren't that great from my loser and some of the things being said I feel like randomly placed in the verse Voted: Cole Slaw / Bnas
Posted on: 2015-04-26 15:17:22

This was a pretty tight battle. Both of you definitely put on a show. I'll start with Cole. I liked your verse, although I would have liked to see a cleaner structure. I got lost a couple of times throughout, not in a major way, but nonetheless I lost your flow here and there. I think the ILL EAGLES/ILLEGALS line could have been much more impactful if it was set up differently. Tbh I didn't see the correlation between steel tools and illegals. That's just me though. Ill, nice response and great job flipping his name. The ending could have been better or a different scheme altogether, and the only reason I say that is because I feel like your verse was a tad bit too saturated trying to fit in as many personals as possible. The first two you had could have been knockout blows had you stayed consistent with them with their set ups and follow-ups. But I don't know everything, just me explaining why I voted the way I did. Good spar fellas. Mid 8 to Low 8. Voted: Cole Slaw / Bnas
Posted on: 2015-04-26 18:45:54

got da steel tools/gotta steal tools.. kiddo's Uma Thurman last name in Kill Bill, the second movie she's out to kill Budd/stealing weed.. first time I ever gave an "expo" Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-04-26 19:02:06

Gb Voted: Cole Slaw / Bnas
Posted on: 2015-04-28 05:32:12

I preferred one to the other fv for me Voted: Cole Slaw / Bnas
Posted on: 2015-04-29 10:44:00

Lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-11-28 13:35:50