Your last bar is a bit played out but ok overall verse no h8 good luck Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-04-20 01:11:45

Alright. I know you guys are fairly new but you can't be battling like it's a cypher. NY winner knows how to execute punches and not contain such cyhperish content and feel to his bars as he came correct but the gunplay can work but has to have a original idea and intricate part that gives wows. It can be very played based on how you word it as well yo. The middle was meh. The final bar isn't super exciting but isn't bad and delivered the point straight forward short and sweet. My loser you did not have a battle oriented verse it was a cypher type verse. You can't deliver a cypher verse in a text battle. You have to attack your opponent. Don't place to much self hype. Note to winner you can execute punchline which proves your nice. W/a little steady activity here you can be dope bro. If you want me to help out. Hmu. whenever. Fair enough. Voted: MARXM3N / Ateleron
Posted on: 2015-04-20 10:00:49

Expo: (2)(12s) Long day 2x12 is 24 24 hrs ina day Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-04-20 11:30:40

One had some decent ideas but didn't connect with them...also both had some stretches in rhymes and ideas but had to go with the one I felt edged it... Voted: MARXM3N / Ateleron
Posted on: 2015-04-20 15:46:49

Clear edge in this match, loser lost me on some of their lines, 1st off some of them didn't make sense and the others were too built up that the punch was flat >elevate, FV Voted: MARXM3N / Ateleron
Posted on: 2015-04-20 22:22:36

damn both brought heavy bars, john rambo Voted: MARXM3N / Ateleron
Posted on: 2015-04-22 15:19:43

Ill i still want u to send me somethin so we can get a hotlister goin Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-04-22 20:50:01